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Posted By: CC Aiken fdbck: Double Helixes 21 - 11/10/03 04:52 AM
Jaxie,

So much good stuff in this part. I adore the humor sprinkled throughout. Over-protective Clark who doesn't want Linda sitting *anywhere* on Jimmy and is tempted to rip the door from the hinges.

I love the 'did we just get the door closed in our faces?' line. Really, a nice reversal of all the times Jimmy interrupted them.

Also, Perry and the Kents...this is all moving along nicely. A fun and interesting read.

CC
Posted By: rivka Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 - 11/10/03 10:46 AM
Yes! Really great segment. laugh

One of my favorite lines:
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“So have you turned up anything yet?” Perry's gruff voice ended the moment as effectively as a stampede of dachshunds.
goofy

All in all, this section had lots of fun, lots of funny, and was waffy too. *sighs happily*
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 - 11/10/03 02:59 PM
Hi,

Great part. smile1
Posted By: merry Re: fdbck: Double Helixes 21 - 11/10/03 04:57 PM
Jaxie
great part
lots of fun
merry
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