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#76452 01/01/11 06:45 AM
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Oh very cute little fic!! Love the flying rat! What havoc will a super powered rat inflict on poor Metropolis? That could be a whole other fic, LOL.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful fic with us!


LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
#76453 01/01/11 08:33 AM
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Bellase, I was thinking the very same thing about super rat! We just about died laughing when we say that the first time. Thanks for keeping him in, Molly.

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“Oh, by the way, I talked to Superman and he said he’s going to help with the repairs to your house. So expect a visit in the next few days.”
That was a nice touch and so in keeping with who Clark is.

Love Lois needling Clark about how to contact Superman then his convienant disappearance.

Joan

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I just read all six parts of the story today. What a fun multi-episode adaptation! You wove the episodes together seamlessly in a logical and AFAIK, novel manner.

Joy,
Lynn

#76455 01/01/11 02:44 PM
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Cute ending to the story. Laura


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#76456 01/02/11 04:52 PM
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I agree about the rat. Why do I have a bad feeling about a super-powered rat loose in Metropolis?

#76457 01/02/11 05:47 PM
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Thanks for the comments!

I can't take credit for the superrat, that's straight out of the episode -- but I agree that following up on it could make a funny story. laugh Come to think of it, rats managed to make their way into quite a few L&C episodes (Seasons Greetings, The Phoenix, and I've Got A Crush On You come to mind.) Hmmm... what's that about?

I'm looking for someone to do kind of a grammar/spelling/punctuation/continuity read on the whole story (I'd send them the updated version of the story I have.) Anyone want to volunteer? PM me if interested.

Thanks again!!


Molly

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