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FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76336 12/27/10 07:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase OP Beat Reporter
OP bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Oh how I loved this chapter!! Love how Clark had to do some creative thinking to try to explain how he was privy to info from Superman. Thanks so much for sharing and looking forward to the next installment! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76337 12/27/10 08:25 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	Oh my goodness, I love this story! I almost missed it, because I had no idea what COTOC meant - I thought it stood for some fic that I hadn't read and you were now posting Part 2 or something. I finally figured it out and I'll say it again, I love this! Your characterization is spot on for both Lois and Clark. So much so that the move back and forth from things that actually happened on the show to your new material is completely seamless. I love your new take on this and the plot twists you are giving it. It's great fun to read. I can't wait to see what happens next. "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76338 12/27/10 01:59 PM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,689 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,689 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Love the merging of the two different episodes. I must admit I liked "Resplendant Man" better than "Wonderman" but that's no big deal. Will we see Denise Crosby's character in the action? (Or the famous Super Rat that my daughter and I loved so much?) It's fun to see how you're developing this. Joan

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76339 12/27/10 04:04 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	Well, Clark has figured out the reason for the power transfer. When he and Lois check if Justin was on the flight, that'll confirm things. Michele is discovering the perils of super-powers! One quibble: I think "abhorable" should be "abhorrent", because I confused it with "adorable".

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76340 12/27/10 04:13 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana HappyGirl Top Banana
HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Great part. You're moving the plot along, and your characterizations are spot on. I cordially disagree with Joan--although Resplendent Man is funny, especially given the character's meek goofiness, Wonderman is a much more sensible name for a would-be superhero. Keep up the good work. This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76341 12/27/10 05:33 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Wow what a chapter. Good job! Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK-COTOC Redux (4/?) #76342 12/28/10 10:10 PM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 291 West Coast, USA LNCroxmysox Hack from Nowheresville
LNCroxmysox Hack from Nowheresville Joined: May 2003 Posts: 291 West Coast, USA	This has been a very fun story to write, I must say. Sorry about the confusion with the "COTOC" title, Vicki. It's just a working title. It'll probably be called "A Little Something Super" when I submit it to the Archive (soon, I hope!) Joan - I'll see what I can do about the superrat, just for you;) More soon! Molly

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