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#75591 11/27/10 02:38 AM
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Very fun! I grinned and giggled all the way through. I loved the 'pat down', especially with its matter-of-fact brevity.
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Clark looked confused as Lois approached him and executed a very professional pat down of her partner. Actually it was rather pleasant. Clark smiled.
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Off With Her Hair! Gentle readers be warned, there is some blue language in this article.


Lois: You know, I have a funny feeling that you didn't tell me your biggest secret.

Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
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#75592 11/27/10 03:00 AM
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"Brunette Bob Butcher strikes again!"
I knew we were in for a laugh right away! clap Lots of fun, Tank! Thanks for the story!


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#75593 11/27/10 12:30 PM
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Now this is what I call a Tank ending! thumbsup

Kathy

#75594 11/28/10 09:51 AM
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Very clever. How like Lois to resist cutting her hair when others wanted her to - regardless of the reason.

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#75595 11/29/10 09:01 AM
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Loved this story and Lois was so typically Lois - stubborn and wouldn't cut her hair just because someone wanted her to.

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#75596 11/29/10 03:30 PM
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Thanks to those who dipped their toe in and sampled this little vignette.

I hope those who partook had some fun with it, as I did in writing it.

This is definately 'my' Lois.

Thanks again.

Tank (who has it from an impecable source that even Rapunzel's life got a whole lot better when she went from long and blonde to short and dark... hair that is)

#75597 11/30/10 03:11 AM
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Tank,

I really liked this story. For a while I thought it was going to have some despicable twist part of the way through, especially when Lois mentioned that the killer could "see through the disguise".

Thank you again for a wonderful story.

clap James clap


“…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26.


Also read Nan's Terran Underground!
#75598 12/01/10 09:11 AM
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Great story, Tank. At first, I figured it would be a humorous fic with a serial haircutter on the loose or something like that. Then I worried about Lois meeting the serial killer. And of course, the Tank ending clap You know, I just realized what the ultimate Tank ending could be: Lois, having to grow her hair again because she's got no time for a regular haircut because of her two babies at home evil

Michael


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