Very fun! I grinned and giggled all the way through. I loved the 'pat down', especially with its matter-of-fact brevity. Sue laughed.

Off With Her Hair! Gentle readers be warned, there is some blue language in this article.

I knew we were in for a laugh right away! Lots of fun, Tank! Thanks for the story!

Now this is what I call a Tank ending!

Kathy

Very clever. How like Lois to resist cutting her hair when others wanted her to - regardless of the reason.

Joan

Loved this story and Lois was so typically Lois - stubborn and wouldn't cut her hair just because someone wanted her to.

Thanks to those who dipped their toe in and sampled this little vignette.

I hope those who partook had some fun with it, as I did in writing it.

This is definately 'my' Lois.

Thanks again.

Tank (who has it from an impecable source that even Rapunzel's life got a whole lot better when she went from long and blonde to short and dark... hair that is)

Tank,

I really liked this story. For a while I thought it was going to have some despicable twist part of the way through, especially when Lois mentioned that the killer could "see through the disguise".

Thank you again for a wonderful story.

James

Great story, Tank. At first, I figured it would be a humorous fic with a serial haircutter on the loose or something like that. Then I worried about Lois meeting the serial killer. And of course, the Tank ending You know, I just realized what the ultimate Tank ending could be: Lois, having to grow her hair again because she's got no time for a regular haircut because of her two babies at home

Michael