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#74378 10/06/10 02:34 PM
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Lois put her hands on his shoulders. "Take me to Metropolis, and I'll show you."

"No," Clark said sharply, the mudslide that was Mayson Drake tumbling into his mind. "You can't go to Metropolis."

The sharpness of his voice drove the triumph from Lois's face. "Why not?"

"Because Mayson knows you were in the library on Wednesday."

Her hand covered her mouth, and her eyes grew wide with alarm. "Mayson *saw* me?"

"You saw Mayson?" he fired back before he could stop himself.
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Ooh, Angry Clark was awesome.

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UGH i hate Mayson.

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Because i do!


LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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Yay!! Another chapter, just for me, right? laugh

OOh, awesome chapter. Go Clark!! He withstood Mayson very well, even with some awful surprises she threw him!

You sure know how to complicate things wonderfully in your story! dance


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wow I am loving this story!!!! can't wait to see what happens next!

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shock I can't wait to find out if the photo is actually going to prove Lois's stay in Metropolis. Reason says 'yes'. But what will it mean. And how did Lois figure out that Mayson (sic) is the Boss?

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That was great! (as always wink ).

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There was every chance Mayson would come back. Clark went to the drawer next to his bed, and he took out his passport and airplane ticket and secured them in his jacket pocket. He wouldn't put it beyond Mayson to steal them.
rotflol I wouldn't put it pass her too! rotflol

Wonder who Lois worked out to be the Boss? She was right about Glisten and St. John, but is she right that Luthor is the Boss? (or is it Mayson - she will actually pass as an evil mastermind).

Looking forward to 58!

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Amy Clark doesn't like Mayson even mentioning Lois's name.

Bellarase Glad you like the story. Mayson isn't nice - but there's a splat ending for her.

Evelyn Yep - just for you! Actually, I was tossing up between posting a part or finishing writing a part, and your post decided for me.

I'm glad you think complicated is good!

Joy Thanks. Next part is posted, but this won't be resolved for a few more parts.

Michael Ooooh - some of your comments run parallel to my thoughts. Can't say any more.

DW Being with Clark has given Lois a chance to utilise her deductive powers. Wonder where that might lead? wink

Thanks for all the FDK. Next part is posted.

Corrina.


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