I'm super excited about this fic! The risque beginning is more daring than I'd write, but I admit I loved every word! And it's all so well written, too!
Got nothing negative to say!
Anecdotally, I will point out that Lynn just posted a fic dealing with Lois' issue in 'Full Partners.' Though that was more tightly in the context of the episode, 'We have a lot to talk about,' it's interesting that this issue has come up in two totally different stories so recently.
Looking forward to more!