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Missy


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More!!!!

Missy, in it's own way this instalment (which was quite good) was a tad frustrating. All the while that the gentle readers were enjoying the supposed marrital bliss that Lois and Clark were having, and the tease of Clark's constant worry about overstepping his promise against Lois' obvious teetering on the edge of actually falling...

It's like waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Clark is soooooo dumb.

Tank (who seems to remember that L&C's vows mentioned something about trust?)

Very sweet. Made me tear up multiple times.

I particularly liked the "flying" scene. Lois isn't the only one who misses Superman. But even here, Clark suppresses and denies his emotions. Can't even own his own tears.

But my main reaction -- similar to Tank's -- was frustration. Which I suppose echoes Clark's and Lois' feelings.

I read all previous parts and this one in one big swoop. I love your story, Missy. In this part I particularly liked the talk Jonathan had with clark before the wedding and that he fixed his tie for him. So sweet!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

One tiny question: is it 'a mute point' or 'a moot point' or are both acceptable in American spelling? I noticed that in this part:

Thanks for clarifying.