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#7131 10/15/03 12:32 PM
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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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Great job. More soon. Laura


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They needed that conversation... blush

Penny has a big problem... she's obsessed :p

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Laura

WOW! This is excellent. goofy Both Lois and Clark’s introspection is great. I can see exactly why they reach the conclusion they do. twins

Yikes! cat I can’t believe that Clark hears a cry for help just then. They desperately need that time together.

Penny’s characterization is excellent. She’s so obsessed! eek

I’m looking forward to reading more. wink

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Terrific, Laura!! thumbsup

I really, really liked this. The emotion in Lois and Clark's long-overdue conversation was tangible, and I was practically holding my breath reading it. LOL at the separate day-planners - and I'm very pleased to see that Lois can distinguish between genuine emergencies and fluff that Superman really doesn't need to be involved in. I just hope Clark can manage to make that distinction in future!

And then we have Penny. Yup, still obsessed! And I loved her thoughts about Superman morphing into a different shape. ROFL! laugh But for now she seems to be going with the 'hiding in plain sight' hypothesis, which doesn't look too good for Clark. eek

But I see there's only one section left, so you can't be planning too much in the way of torture for our heroes.

I hope your exams go well, and post soon!!


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Thanks for your feedback, Maria, Laura, Jose, Tricia, and Wendy!


I really appreciate you all for sticking with it! I hope you all like the ending that will be posted soon. There are several themes I tried to weave together in this story, and I hope they come together in the ending smile . It is an nfic ending and I have converted the nfic to gfic and I will post it this weekend.

- Laura smile


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Sticking with it? Well, this reader can't wait to read each segment and is having a whale of a time here. goofy

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Forget talking, she wanted action.
Smart cookie!

And then what a lovely waffy moment followed. <happy sigh> And a great heart to heart. clap

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Without a second thought, Clark took a deep breath and hurried toward the staircase, the feel of Lois's lips still fresh on his lips.
Oh oh...

LabRat (on to the final segment and holding her breath...)



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WOW!! I just finished the AKA Clark Kent story and it was great. I love they emotional parts.

Keep up the good work. I'm anxious to read more stories by you.


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smile1 Wow! Thank you!!! I haven't checked the fanfic section for a while now, and I was absolutely shocked to see this folder!

I am glad you enjoyed this story. It is one I am very proud of.

I am currently posting a story called "Nightmare Come True", so if you like my writing, you might want to check it out.

- Laura smile


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