FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/15/03 04:32 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Great part.
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/15/03 06:31 PM
Great job. More soon. Laura
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/16/03 02:29 AM
They needed that conversation... 
Penny has a big problem... she's obsessed :p
Jose
Penny has a big problem... she's obsessed :p
Jose
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/16/03 03:32 AM
Laura
WOW! This is excellent.
Both Lois and Clark’s introspection is great. I can see exactly why they reach the conclusion they do. 
Yikes!
I can’t believe that Clark hears a cry for help just then. They desperately need that time together.
Penny’s characterization is excellent. She’s so obsessed!
I’m looking forward to reading more.
Tricia
WOW! This is excellent.
Both Lois and Clark’s introspection is great. I can see exactly why they reach the conclusion they do. Yikes!
I can’t believe that Clark hears a cry for help just then. They desperately need that time together.Penny’s characterization is excellent. She’s so obsessed!
I’m looking forward to reading more.
Tricia
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/16/03 12:51 PM
Terrific, Laura!! 
I really, really liked this. The emotion in Lois and Clark's long-overdue conversation was tangible, and I was practically holding my breath reading it. LOL at the separate day-planners - and I'm very pleased to see that Lois can distinguish between genuine emergencies and fluff that Superman really doesn't need to be involved in. I just hope Clark can manage to make that distinction in future!
And then we have Penny. Yup, still obsessed! And I loved her thoughts about Superman morphing into a different shape. ROFL!
But for now she seems to be going with the 'hiding in plain sight' hypothesis, which doesn't look too good for Clark.
But I see there's only one section left, so you can't be planning too much in the way of torture for our heroes.
I hope your exams go well, and post soon!!
Wendy
I really, really liked this. The emotion in Lois and Clark's long-overdue conversation was tangible, and I was practically holding my breath reading it. LOL at the separate day-planners - and I'm very pleased to see that Lois can distinguish between genuine emergencies and fluff that Superman really doesn't need to be involved in. I just hope Clark can manage to make that distinction in future!
And then we have Penny. Yup, still obsessed! And I loved her thoughts about Superman morphing into a different shape. ROFL!
But for now she seems to be going with the 'hiding in plain sight' hypothesis, which doesn't look too good for Clark. But I see there's only one section left, so you can't be planning too much in the way of torture for our heroes.
I hope your exams go well, and post soon!!
Wendy
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/17/03 07:39 PM
Thanks for your feedback, Maria, Laura, Jose, Tricia, and Wendy!
I really appreciate you all for sticking with it! I hope you all like the ending that will be posted soon. There are several themes I tried to weave together in this story, and I hope they come together in the ending . It is an nfic ending and I have converted the nfic to gfic and I will post it this weekend.
- Laura
I really appreciate you all for sticking with it! I hope you all like the ending that will be posted soon. There are several themes I tried to weave together in this story, and I hope they come together in the ending
. It is an nfic ending and I have converted the nfic to gfic and I will post it this weekend.- Laura
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 10/18/03 04:31 AM
Sticking with it? Well, this reader can't wait to read each segment and is having a whale of a time here.
Smart cookie!
And then what a lovely waffy moment followed. <happy sigh> And a great heart to heart.
Oh oh...
LabRat (on to the final segment and holding her breath...)
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Forget talking, she wanted action.
And then what a lovely waffy moment followed. <happy sigh> And a great heart to heart.
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Without a second thought, Clark took a deep breath and hurried toward the staircase, the feel of Lois's lips still fresh on his lips.
LabRat (on to the final segment and holding her breath...)
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 04/13/04 05:22 PM
WOW!! I just finished the AKA Clark Kent story and it was great. I love they emotional parts.
Keep up the good work. I'm anxious to read more stories by you.
Keep up the good work. I'm anxious to read more stories by you.
Re: FDK:AKA Clark Kent-Part 6/7 - 04/14/04 08:43 PM
Wow! Thank you!!! I haven't checked the fanfic section for a while now, and I was absolutely shocked to see this folder! I am glad you enjoyed this story. It is one I am very proud of.
I am currently posting a story called "Nightmare Come True", so if you like my writing, you might want to check it out.
- Laura