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Thank you, Tank, for posting that. What fun -- and it was delightful to see Lois NOT getting mad at the revelation for a change. :-)
cheers,
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Yes, yes, YES! Somebody has FINALLY gotten the revelation right! I am so sick of Lois getting mad! She has just gotten everything she could want. Her reaction was perfect!  So you might figure out that I liked this story.
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Hah, what a sweet ending! I loved that Lois kissed Clark to find out if she was all right with knowing who he really is!  Ann
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Ahh, that was so sweet and nice  It was nice for a change Lois not getting mad and actually being kinda cool about it!
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Delightful ending. Definitely works with the story and gives so much better closure  Michael
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Thanks Tank. I love closure. Nice ending. Laura
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This was great, Tank. I love the whole story and especially Lois's upbeat reaction to the revelation.
It gets me wondering about doing variants of regular S1 and S2 episodes where Lois learns the secret and her reaction is unexpectedly positive. There could be some really interesting ideas in there.
Anyway, thanks for the wonderful story.
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You're so nice to us, Tank. :p
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Lois rolled her eyes. "Clark, Superman is invulnerable." I can just see Lois rolling her eyes. Great choice of words.
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YAY!!!!!!! And thanks!
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So, did the gentle readers approve of the non-typical revealtion?
Like everyone else, we all like to intensify Lois' actual feelings for Clark in the earlier stages of their partnership, but like I said before the story, I always thought that this episode really showed and basic change in Lois' attitude toward Clark. So, what the heck.
Also, it's early enough in their relationship for Lois not to really have any reason to be upset that Clark hadn't confided in her yet. Their friendship was just beginning and the purpose of the events of the fic were to force Lois to confront her feelings for Clark earlier than she did in the series.
Under those circumstances, and knowing that she still hero worshipped Superman, I can't see how she would not be thrilled by the prospect that her partner and new best friend was also Superman.
Thanks for the kind words.
Tank (who thinks he might finally be getting over his unexplicable need to punch out a few vignettes as of late)
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Great ending, Tank!  Artemis
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Tank, why is this story not on the Archive where it belongs? (Good story, btw. Sorry I missed it the first time around.)
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Totally lost on why these got separated on the Archives, but no whoop.  And poor Lois, sigh, suffering through another life-altering haircut. No matter how much Clark tries to reassure her that the accident wasn't her fault, she knew the truth (that she'd always have blamed herself -- good thing, he has invulnerability on his side  ) I love her take on his reveal.  So, S1 Lois! Look at all we'll be able to do! Loved it. Thanks for sharing.
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