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Yay! Another Tank story.
Including a haircut for Lois.
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Nice job Tank. I'd love to see more though. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Awww, that's really nice! And Lois found out that Clark is Superman, too! I think this was my favorite quote from your fic: If Clark's stupidity caused himself further serious injury, she'd kill him. How's that for the quintessential Lois Lane?   Ann
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Originally posted by Laurach:
Nice job Tank. I'd love to see more though. I second the motion. :-) Thanks for starting my day with a WAFF. cheers, Lynn
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I would also like to see more!
Great job!
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Nice! How about a sequel - the revelation! Please?! Pretty Please?!
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Oooh, love this story! And of course you had to get the haircut in there. Poor Lois, dealing with that guilt. I disagree.. revelation stories have been done to death. It doesn't need a sequel.  *hoping that reverse psychology works*
"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
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Yay! I see you made sure to get the haircut in first thing--you have your priorities.
Great story. And I want to echo everything that Dandello and Karen said.
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Continuation please??? 
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Sorry, I would have to disagree with those who disagree re a continuation.  It doesn't bother me that revelation stories have 'been done to death' - it is part and parcel of the Superman/Clark Kent/Lois Lane triangle and I for one never tire of reading the differing slants writers put on this scenario. It's fun to read all the stories posted here, so the more the merrier!  Looking forward the the sequel.  Elizabeth
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Another haircut  And Clark survived Michael
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I think this is a first. This is the first BAD haircut that you've ever given Lois. (Or am I mistaken? Hmmm....)
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I read this at work today, secretly and with many stops while taking phone calls. And knowing who the author is, I was very afraid until I got to the very end. Thank God Clark did not die! I am so relieved! Natascha who doesn't need the revelation either. The truth is out there now and they will take it from there. 
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Believe me; the haircut is worse than the wound." Oh, no! How could you do that to Lois? (Very easily, ha ha.)
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Many thanks to the gentle readers who took the time to read and comment on my little vignette.
Responses are always appreciated.
As for the 'haircut'; technically it was really not a haircut per se. Lois had an injury that required a patch be shaved so the nurse would be able to stitch up her wound. Not a true haircut, but merely a 'hole' in her actual hairstyle.
Of course, that is not to say that Lois might be forced to significantly shorten her hair to accomadate a more natural grow out of her bald spot. One can only speculate.
More? Why would any one want to see more of this story? Who knows, there might be a short epilogue at some point once this tired old man recovers from a hellish week at work.
Tank (who also has to deal with a leaking washing machine... does the fun never end)
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Hahaha! I love that Lois gets her standard Tank haircut right off the bat! even about to get a buzz cut from the nurse! good story/reveal at the end... wouldn't have minded if clark's recovery would've been a more extended story...
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I missed this the first time around. Very cute!  Artemis
History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod
Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis
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