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Posted By: Dandello FDK - The Accident - 03/24/10 09:55 PM
Yay! Another Tank story.

Including a haircut for Lois.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/24/10 10:14 PM
Nice job Tank. I'd love to see more though. Laura
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/24/10 11:49 PM
Awww, that's really nice! And Lois found out that Clark is Superman, too!

I think this was my favorite quote from your fic:

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If Clark's stupidity caused himself further serious injury, she'd kill him.
How's that for the quintessential Lois Lane? laugh clap

Ann
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 04:40 AM
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Originally posted by Laurach:
Nice job Tank. I'd love to see more though.
I second the motion. :-)

Thanks for starting my day with a WAFF.

cheers,
Lynn
Posted By: DW Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 04:54 AM
I would also like to see more!

Great job!
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 05:13 AM
Nice! How about a sequel - the revelation! Please?! Pretty Please?!
Posted By: Karen Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 07:29 AM
Oooh, love this story! And of course you had to get the haircut in there. laugh Poor Lois, dealing with that guilt.

I disagree.. revelation stories have been done to death. It doesn't need a sequel.

peep *hoping that reverse psychology works*
Posted By: cookiesmom Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 09:25 AM
Yay! I see you made sure to get the haircut in first thing--you have your priorities.

Great story. And I want to echo everything that Dandello and Karen said.
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 10:53 AM
Continuation please??? grovel
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK - The Accident - Part One - 03/25/10 01:17 PM
Sorry, I would have to disagree with those who disagree re a continuation. wink

It doesn't bother me that revelation stories have 'been done to death' - it is part and parcel of the Superman/Clark Kent/Lois Lane triangle and I for one never tire of reading the differing slants writers put on this scenario. It's fun to read all the stories posted here, so the more the merrier! smile1

Looking forward the the sequel. laugh

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Elizabeth
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 02:30 PM
Another haircut eek And Clark survived clap

Michael
Posted By: Elisabeth Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 05:40 PM
I think this is a first. This is the first BAD haircut that you've ever given Lois. (Or am I mistaken? Hmmm....)


Elisabeth
Posted By: In4Adventure Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 08:36 PM
I read this at work today, secretly and with many stops while taking phone calls. And knowing who the author is, I was very afraid until I got to the very end.

Thank God Clark did not die! I am so relieved!

Natascha who doesn't need the revelation either. The truth is out there now and they will take it from there. smile
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/25/10 08:40 PM
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Believe me; the haircut is worse than the wound."
Oh, no! How could you do that to Lois? (Very easily, ha ha.)
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/27/10 08:47 AM
Many thanks to the gentle readers who took the time to read and comment on my little vignette.
Responses are always appreciated.
As for the 'haircut'; technically it was really not a haircut per se. Lois had an injury that required a patch be shaved so the nurse would be able to stitch up her wound. Not a true haircut, but merely a 'hole' in her actual hairstyle.

Of course, that is not to say that Lois might be forced to significantly shorten her hair to accomadate a more natural grow out of her bald spot. One can only speculate.

More? Why would any one want to see more of this story? Who knows, there might be a short epilogue at some point once this tired old man recovers from a hellish week at work.

Tank (who also has to deal with a leaking washing machine... does the fun never end)
Posted By: flowerpot Re: FDK - The Accident - 03/28/10 12:02 AM
Hahaha! I love that Lois gets her standard Tank haircut right off the bat! smile even about to get a buzz cut from the nurse! smile

good story/reveal at the end... wouldn't have minded if clark's recovery would've been a more extended story...
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK - The Accident - 11/09/10 05:41 PM
I missed this the first time around. Very cute!
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Artemis
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