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Comments? Suggestions for making the story better?

smile Jude


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"Simplify. Simplify."
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"To see what is in front of one's nose is a constant struggle."
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Interesting.

Some startling developments revealed here.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Tank (who wonders how far this Lois wil actually go in the pursuit of a story)

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Jude,

Well, don't want to say too much and give anything away. But I was glad and surprised when that other character showed up at that apartment where Clark was. (is that vague enough?) Having read the spoiler, I expected this particular character, just not so soon.

And now we have our cast assembled, and I can't wait to see what befalls Mr Big.

Also, I have to commend your making such good use of D. Scardino! A character I generally find useless, but so well done here, and I can just see him.

Nice work. Am really enjoying.

CC


You mean we're supposed to have lives?

Oh crap!

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Thanks for your comments, Tank and CC. Here come Parts 7 and 8.

smile Jude

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"Simplify. Simplify."
Henry David Thoreau

"To see what is in front of one's nose is a constant struggle."
George Orwell

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