Comments? Suggestions for making the story better?

Jude

Interesting.

Some startling developments revealed here.

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

Tank (who wonders how far this Lois wil actually go in the pursuit of a story)

Jude,

Well, don't want to say too much and give anything away. But I was glad and surprised when that other character showed up at that apartment where Clark was. (is that vague enough?) Having read the spoiler, I expected this particular character, just not so soon.

And now we have our cast assembled, and I can't wait to see what befalls Mr Big.

Also, I have to commend your making such good use of D. Scardino! A character I generally find useless, but so well done here, and I can just see him.

Nice work. Am really enjoying.

CC

Thanks for your comments, Tank and CC. Here come Parts 7 and 8.

Jude