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THE PORTRAIT FDK PARTS 3 AND 4 #6903 10/09/03 07:35 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 253 Evergreen State, USA J Jude OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Jude Hack from Nowheresville J Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 253 Evergreen State, USA	Comments? Suggestions to make the story better? Jude "Simplify. Simplify." Henry David Thoreau "To see what is in front of one's nose is a constant struggle." George Orwell

Re: THE PORTRAIT FDK PARTS 3 AND 4 #6904 10/10/03 03:50 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers... CC Aiken Top Banana
CC Aiken Top Banana Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,047 where the 7 hills and 3 rivers...	Jude, I don't think I can do justice to how great I think this is! I adore and admire your descriptions. Lois who isn't afraid to look under rocks. And Lex who dominates a room impossible to dominate. In those simple words you sum them up so perfectly. And Clark's heartwrenching stay in Lois' apartment. Man, so sad and so charged. I am hanging on your every word, and love how this is developing! Amazing. This is the way I want to write. CC You mean we're supposed to have lives? Oh crap! ~Tank

Re: THE PORTRAIT FDK PARTS 3 AND 4 #6905 10/10/03 06:36 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	Hi, Jude! Good to see you posting over here. Of course, you already know how I feel about this story, but for anyone who didn't see my posts over in the nfic folder, let me just say right here and now: This story is the best!! To everyone out there who is reading this now, all I can say is, you are in for a great ride. It just keeps getting better and better, with each new chapter. Excellent story-telling, Jude! - Vicki "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: THE PORTRAIT FDK PARTS 3 AND 4 #6906 10/10/03 08:04 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 253 Evergreen State, USA J Jude OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP Jude Hack from Nowheresville J Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 253 Evergreen State, USA	CC and Vicki, Wow!!! How can I reply to such ego-building comments. Just know that I appreciate that you're enjoying this story and that I hope it continues to meet your expectations. Thank you, so much! Jude "Simplify. Simplify." Henry David Thoreau "To see what is in front of one's nose is a constant struggle." George Orwell

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