Comments? Suggestions to make the story better?

Jude

Jude,

I don't think I can do justice to how great I think this is!

I adore and admire your descriptions. Lois who isn't afraid to look under rocks. And Lex who dominates a room impossible to dominate. In those simple words you sum them up so perfectly.

And Clark's heartwrenching stay in Lois' apartment. Man, so sad and so charged.

I am hanging on your every word, and love how this is developing!

Amazing. This is the way I want to write.

CC

Hi, Jude!

Good to see you posting over here. Of course, you already know how I feel about this story, but for anyone who didn't see my posts over in the nfic folder, let me just say right here and now:

This story is the best!! To everyone out there who is reading this now, all I can say is, you are in for a great ride. It just keeps getting better and better, with each new chapter.

Excellent story-telling, Jude!

- Vicki

CC and Vicki, Wow!!! How can I reply to such ego-building comments. Just know that I appreciate that you're enjoying this story and that I hope it continues to meet your expectations.

Thank you, so much!

Jude