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#6663 09/28/03 12:23 AM
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This is excellent. smile1

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Absolutely! This is great, Laura! goofy

The A-plot looks great so far! You've shown Penny's mania and her determination to get her hero... but woe betide her when Lois finds out what she's up to! wink


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Laura,
excellent part
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Hi,

Great part. smile1


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You're doing a really nice job Laura! Nice introspection and you're putting great feeling into the words.

I'm looking forward to more! thumbsup thumbsup

~Liz


Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Thanks for your comments, Tricia, Wendy, Merry, Maria, and Liz laugh . I am really glad you liked it.

Tricia, I'm glad you liked the addition of Sydney harbor wink .

Like I've been saying, this is the first story I've ever written with an A-plot, so I am really scared to post it. I appreciate all of your comments.

Part 3 comming shortly smile .

- Laura


Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve

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