Laura

This is excellent.

Tricia

Absolutely! This is great, Laura!

The A-plot looks great so far! You've shown Penny's mania and her determination to get her hero... but woe betide her when Lois finds out what she's up to!


Wendy

Laura,
excellent part
merry

Hi,

Great part.

You're doing a really nice job Laura! Nice introspection and you're putting great feeling into the words.

I'm looking forward to more!

~Liz

Thanks for your comments, Tricia, Wendy, Merry, Maria, and Liz . I am really glad you liked it.

Tricia, I'm glad you liked the addition of Sydney harbor .

Like I've been saying, this is the first story I've ever written with an A-plot, so I am really scared to post it. I appreciate all of your comments.

Part 3 comming shortly .

- Laura