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FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65555 08/11/09 07:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis OP Pulitzer
OP Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	One more part to go. It should be posted by Saturday. Thanks for coming along on the ride! As I said, these will be continuing stories. I feel less guilty about not posting more frequently if I break them into smaller episodes like this. Your feedback helps me keep the pressure on the muse. Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65556 08/12/09 03:34 AM
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amberlea Columnist A Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 581 Sugar Land, TX	I love how you've weaved elements of the Pilot into your story...it's shaping up to be a very different perspective on the White Orchid Ball. It's very interesting how this different profession has made Clark more assertive, more confident. I'm excited to see what the next story brings, and I'm hoping for a non-cliffhanger for part 11! Amber

Re: FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65557 08/12/09 08:54 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Fun part, Artemis Quote “In the desk was an invitation to Lex Luthor’s White Orchid Ball at the beginning of next month. Use it and go.” I did not expect Toni to be turning like that. Nice twist on the Pilot, had to go back and compare how you changed it and Quote “Getting in Lex Luthor’s door and observing him in action. Not to mention getting a date with you.” “For that, you could just ask, or phone.” Wonder what the WOB will bring Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65558 08/12/09 05:49 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis OP Pulitzer
OP Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	/me wipes brow. The last part is in for beta. Thanks for all your kind responses. I'm glad you are enjoying it. Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65559 08/12/09 07:07 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana HappyGirl Top Banana
HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	Great part, Artemis. And I love your twist--Clark Kent undercover as...Clark Kent. Yes, I agree, hooray for confident, assertive Clark. This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK: Pt. 10 All the Daytime and the Nighttime #65560 08/10/11 06:57 PM
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VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I'm totally confused. Luthor thinks he has a deal with Toni and yet she's passing Clark the invite to the White Orchid Ball. Is that what she's supposed to do to get her jail free card? Or is she defying Luthor? I love Lois's idea on having Agent Kent work as a reporter at the DP. I wonder what Perry will think of that. So in this alt-dimension universe, Jimmy is a gopher/researcher not OWNER of the DP? Time to read part 11 and beyond. You've got me sucked in. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

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