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#63284 05/05/09 05:52 PM
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FDK here.

Thanks!

#63285 05/05/09 06:36 PM
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Oh My God! They are *both* suffering so much! AAck!
Can't wait to see where you go next.
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#63286 05/05/09 09:15 PM
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I love it but they are both in so much pain! mecry

How can you leave them (and us!) suffering so? mecry

However, very nice and VERY intense.

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Won't they ever let each other finish a sentence when it is important? wallbash
They suffer so much. I hope that they will do some talking in the next part.
Really great part! I love it!


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so not happy with you right now. I was alternately amused and (very) frustrated with the "I'm S-" cut offs!! aaaargh!

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Ack this is frustrating. He should have screamed it at her! Get back here! wildguy More soon. Laura


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#63290 05/06/09 06:23 PM
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Yeah - it was a terrible place to leave them. Sorry.

Artemis Thanks for posting. As for where we go next, surely things have to get a bit better eventually ... don't they?

Bob Thanks. Yes, it was not nice to leave it there. However, there's a bit in the middle of Part 6 where I'd like to leave everyone dangling, but I will resist the temptation and post the entire part. laugh

Kathryn Talking would be a good start. Thanks for your comments.

Sarahg peep Sorry! You were amused? Even a little? Whoa! The frustration I can definitely understand, though. Thanks for the FDK.

Laura Maybe that's what it needs - for Clark to do some screaming. Thanks for the FDK.


Part 6 - hopefully Friday.

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#63291 05/06/09 08:16 PM
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On the one hand, I'm glad Lois has been able to cry, to let some of the emotion out.

On the other...this part was heart-wrenching. Of course it would be an orphanage Clark would have to save. He had no choice.

And he even tried to tell Lois the truth. Though I would argue he didn't try hard enough, I understand how Lois in that (understandable) mood would be difficult to deal with.

I don't know how you're going to get them out of this one, but I hope you post again soon!

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“Clark,” she said coolly and distantly. “Before you say anything else, you should understand this - whatever might have been between us is over.”
dizzy dizzy mecry

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#63293 05/09/09 08:14 PM
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blush Thanks Michael blush

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So poignant and heartbreaking! And clever... The 'I'm S--'/"sorry" was so well done! smile1


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