FDK here.

Thanks!

Oh My God! They are *both* suffering so much! AAck!
Can't wait to see where you go next.

Artemis

I love it but they are both in so much pain!

How can you leave them (and us!) suffering so?

However, very nice and VERY intense.

Bob

Won't they ever let each other finish a sentence when it is important?
They suffer so much. I hope that they will do some talking in the next part.
Really great part! I love it!

so not happy with you right now. I was alternately amused and (very) frustrated with the "I'm S-" cut offs!! aaaargh!

Ack this is frustrating. He should have screamed it at her! Get back here! More soon. Laura

Yeah - it was a terrible place to leave them. Sorry.

Artemis Thanks for posting. As for where we go next, surely things have to get a bit better eventually ... don't they?

Bob Thanks. Yes, it was not nice to leave it there. However, there's a bit in the middle of Part 6 where I'd like to leave everyone dangling, but I will resist the temptation and post the entire part.

Kathryn Talking would be a good start. Thanks for your comments.

Sarahg Sorry! You were amused? Even a little? Whoa! The frustration I can definitely understand, though. Thanks for the FDK.

Laura Maybe that's what it needs - for Clark to do some screaming. Thanks for the FDK.


Part 6 - hopefully Friday.

Corrina.

On the one hand, I'm glad Lois has been able to cry, to let some of the emotion out.

On the other...this part was heart-wrenching. Of course it would be an orphanage Clark would have to save. He had no choice.

And he even tried to tell Lois the truth. Though I would argue he didn't try hard enough, I understand how Lois in that (understandable) mood would be difficult to deal with.

I don't know how you're going to get them out of this one, but I hope you post again soon!

Amber

Michael

Thanks Michael

Corrina.

So poignant and heartbreaking! And clever... The 'I'm S--'/"sorry" was so well done!