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****Well, FOLCs, what do you think? Want to know what happens next? Anyone willing to beta? This is my first story; should I keep going? Let me know.
This *is* my happily ever after.
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Pulitzer
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Very interesting!
Can't wait to see more!
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I definitely want to know what happens next!
I'm curious why Tempus told her he'd erased her memory when we all know that he took her forward in time. (right?) But clearly she has future Lois's body...so maybe I'm just confused! (Not uncommon for me.)
I'd be willing to beta if you need me.
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I am definitly interested as well!
Good start!
I love time travelling stories!
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Pulitzer
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Oh, please, please, please! You need to keep going. I need to know what happens next. Pretty please?  Andreia
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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Top Banana
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Please post more soon. Absolutely loved the plotline..
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Very intriguing start. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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oh what a wonderful story and a wonderful start!!!
*runs to read chapter 2*
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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Pulitzer
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You can't stop now! With the setup you've got, stopping now would be cruel and unusual punishment. Which is expressly forbidden in the Bill of Rights. Therefore, you must continue. Or else you'll be in violation of the law.
So there.
(All kidding aside, I really want to know what happens next!)
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A very interesting set-up. Of course, my first thought was that Tempus had taken her to a different time or a different dimension; however, the fact that her own body has changed is intriguing. Is this a new twist on the soul tracker technology?
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