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FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60870 02/10/09 10:03 AM
Joined: Nov 2008 Posts: 64 USA M maxkeegan OP Freelance Reporter
OP maxkeegan Freelance Reporter M Joined: Nov 2008 Posts: 64 USA	Any comments or suggestions would be appreciated. The story is becoming bigger than I first imagined, but I am keeping up my writing schedule. Max

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60871 02/10/09 11:06 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Wow! Very good. Piece by piece he shares his story with Lois. Too bad they didn't get to dance together to see how smoothly they interact. Maybe the next part? Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60872 02/10/09 04:48 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326 R robinson Beat Reporter
robinson Beat Reporter R Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 326	Wonderful part. I love how their relationship is developing and how Clark is learning to trust and open up to Lois 'He continued to look at Lois, drawn to what was reflected in her eyes at that moment. It was in that moment that he realized something. That there was more in her eyes than he had ever seen in Lena’s. There was the strength, the courage, and the confidence. But more, he saw the reflection of her caring… her heart. The excitement of being with Lena had blinded him to the fact that he never saw that in her eyes. The realization gave him the courage to say to Lois, “Lena. Her name was Lena.” I love these paragraphs. They are so beautifully written and so moving. Perfect robinson

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60873 02/10/09 11:46 PM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13	Nice. But they have come all this way - tuxed and zipped- looking good, and smelling good and everything...they must dance together, if only once. Lena is no longer a bad word now that Lois is in Clark's life-for real-as they say. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60874 02/11/09 10:18 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,956 Likes: 28	Very nice. Clark's slowly opening up Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60875 02/11/09 12:20 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Now things should start getting really interesting. I like these two slightly different versions of Lois and Clark. Clark is not so naive since he's been burned himself. Can't tell if this Lois is as guarded because of her past as we normally would see her, or if she is just so intrigued by this guy who obviously likes her, but doesn't chase. He's a bit of an inigma and curiousity can cause her to let down her defenses. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Tank (who thinks that maybe a haircut for Lois might make Clark a bit more receptive since Lois would look even better than she does now... right?)

Re: FDK - Reflections, Part 16 #60876 02/12/09 09:26 PM
Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 52 flowerpot Freelance Reporter
flowerpot Freelance Reporter Joined: Sep 2004 Posts: 52	I love this story! I love the premise; this different side of Clark... can't wait to watch these 2 characters develop... and for further updates!

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