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*whistle* interesting turn of events.... I wonder how it will end....
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Holy crap! get back here quick!
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Ack! Now what will Lois do?
I loved seeing Lois and Clark work together in this context, though. Lois' inner narrative makes me smile.
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Aargh! Secret government agents, Leo Nunk (haven't seen him for awhile and I kind of missed him), Clark's secret exposed! Can everyone be kept quiet? Can Lois be safe?
Don't leave it on this evil cliffhanger! Post more soon!
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Ahh gaaaahhh!!!! What a story!!! It's masterful, but it's killing me!!!
I love seeing Lois and Clark like this. Their instant connection is coming through so beautifully. I couldn't help laughing at Lois's imprompty kissing of Clark in the car to cover up their real activities. It's Honeymoon In Metropolis all over again, but this way it really was much nicer!
Again, I love seeing Lois and Clark like this. They don't have all that baggage of hurt and resentment, just fresh, instant bonding.
But that's a heck of an A-plot you are cooking up for us! What will Lois do now? Will she put her feelings for Clark before a potentially Pulitzer-winning scoop? And what will happen to Nunk, Franklin Hodge and whoever has been trying to kill Lois and Clark in this story?
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 You can't leave it there. Come back and tell us how things end. I've always wondered what Lois would have done if she learned Clark's secret, before she and Clark built their friendship/relationship. Lois of Season I, even the middle of Season I, would have run with the story IMO. Here, you have the start of something between Lois and Clark, but it's just on the cusp. Will Lois write the story and expose him? I don't think so, but she may convince him to give her the Superman story. How are they both going to end up at the Planet at the end of this? I told you so many loose ends to tie up. Come back!
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I love secret government cover ups.
As for Lois...I believe she would run the story if she had never met Clark or his parents...but so far we've never had a tv show episode or a story like that as far as I know, so I'll assume she'll cave in a fit of ethics and protect Clark.
Looking forward to the conclusion!
JD
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Very interesting!
Looking forward to the next part!
[and the sequel you're going to write right?]
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Whoa--I cannot wait until the next post!  ~Sheila
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Aaaaeeee!!!!  It doesn't help that this is appearing at the same time as "From the Runis" that speaks so eloquently to what can go wrong if Lois makes a certain choice. I loved the whole part but a very anxious as to what will be in part 3. Especially since this will apparantly be 3 of 3. Bob
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OMG! This is an awesome story!! I screamed when it came to the end, i wanted it to continue!
Love how original this fic is!! Truly amazing stuff. Can't wait to see the next (and final) chapter!
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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I think it's interesting that Lois is giving second thoughts to the idea of printing what she suspects about Clark.
I also think it's interesting that she takes the information at face value. It would be an easy shortcut for either the NASA geeks or for Nunc to take to just alter an existing photo. Of course, I live in an age of Adobe Photoshop.
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Could you post the next part soon, Female Hawk? Please? I'm going through withdrawal here!
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Great stuff! I too love the instant connection between Lois and Clark and Lois realizing that he really is a great guy.  I do worry about the government showing up. Poor Clark! Are you sure there is only one part left? I hope it is not a tank ending!  Seems to me to get the resolution we all want would take longer.  Natascha
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ok i'm dying for the last part! What can I say - I'm greedy 
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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To all of you who posted feedback - Thank you so much.
I hadn't written anything for a long time (12 years!) - even then it was mundane stuff done to help support the family coffers.
This was such fun to write - and sharing it with you - and receiving such awesome feedback - made it so much more enjoyable.
So again .... many, many thanks.
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What a cliffhanger! I'm glad I hadn't read it before because now I don't need to wait to read part 3! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.smilies-and-more.de/pics/smilies/cheeky/154.gif)
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
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