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FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 #5713 08/22/03 11:45 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 #5714 08/24/03 07:40 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast daneel Kerth
daneel Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,217 Exiled to Mare Nostrum coast	Okay, Anna, this part is interesting It seems that Lois is atracted to Clark And Clark prefer not to scare Lois Short!!! Jose "Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot

Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 #5715 08/24/03 11:20 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment Vicki Top Banana
Vicki Top Banana Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,384 Isle of Enchantment	This part was a lot of fun, Anna. I loved how each one would analyze and second-guess every word he/she had just said. Who hasn't done that before? Clark's book review was great, too. Quote Why wait for the blue prince or the fairy princess, when we can find the love sitting at the next desk? The conversation Clark has with Lois is also really nice. Quote “You are indeed too romantic to be a man. Are you a man?” she asked, something teasingly evil in her tone. “I think so,” he said, grinning. and, of course, what Maria pointed out: Quote “Looking for the fairy princess?” she said, half-seriously, half-jokingly. “No… I'm exploring the nearby desks.” Very nice. I like that Clark is having thoughts of exploring Lois' desk a bit more "meticulously"! LOL Then, just when things are getting really interesting, Lois goes and changes the subject and they're off to the Mayor's house. Aaargh! Well, I must remind myself that this is set way back in the time of the Pilot, so I guess we can't have things happening too quickly, can we? As Daneel said... TOO SHORT!! MORE!! SOON!!! - Vicki "Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster

Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 #5716 08/27/03 12:14 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Well, this is an interesting take on the beginning of Lois and Clark's relationship, Anna. Very cute at points and I liked Clark's review. More please - soon as you can manage. I'm keen to see where we go from here. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

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