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Posted By: mariadferdez. FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 - 08/22/03 03:45 PM
Hi,

Great part. smile1
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 - 08/24/03 11:40 PM
Okay, Anna, this part is interesting smile

It seems that Lois is atracted to Clark wink

And Clark prefer not to scare Lois laugh

Short!!! grumble

Jose wave
Posted By: Vicki Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 - 08/25/03 03:20 AM
This part was a lot of fun, Anna. I loved how each one would analyze and second-guess every word he/she had just said. Who hasn't done that before?

Clark's book review was great, too.

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Why wait for the blue prince or the fairy princess, when we can find the love sitting at the next desk?
The conversation Clark has with Lois is also really nice.

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“You are indeed too romantic to be a man. Are you a man?” she asked, something teasingly evil in her tone.

“I think so,” he said, grinning.
and, of course, what Maria pointed out:

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“Looking for the fairy princess?” she said, half-seriously, half-jokingly.

“No… I'm exploring the nearby desks.”
Very nice. I like that Clark *is* having thoughts of exploring Lois' desk a bit more "meticulously"! LOL

Then, just when things are getting really interesting, Lois goes and changes the subject and they're off to the Mayor's house. Aaargh! Well, I must remind myself that this is set way back in the time of the Pilot, so I guess we can't have things happening *too* quickly, can we?

As Daneel said... TOO SHORT!!

MORE!!

SOON!!!

- Vicki wave
Posted By: LabRat Re: FDK:The Walls Between Us-Part 2 - 08/27/03 04:14 PM
Well, this is an interesting take on the beginning of Lois and Clark's relationship, Anna. Very cute at points and I liked Clark's review.

More please - soon as you can manage. I'm keen to see where we go from here. smile

LabRat smile
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