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FDK: Secrets #54449 08/06/08 02:03 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm OP Pulitzer
OP carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Nancy - I love this!!!! I was starting to wonder if Jimmy was Superman, but that didn't seem quite right. Now the sequel could start with... "What do you mean we're fraternal twins?" . Seriously. I understand Lois' frustrations and wonder if Jimmy's intervention will be enough to sooth Mad Dog Lane. Would be interesting to see . Carol My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Secrets #54450 08/06/08 02:32 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase Beat Reporter
bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Oh loved this! I could just picture Lois and her fury, LOL. Great job! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK: Secrets #54451 08/06/08 02:48 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Wonderful Jimmy flies! Will Lois forgive Clark? Can Jimmy take some jobs so that Clark doesn't lose Lois! Loved this

Re: FDK: Secrets #54452 08/06/08 03:40 PM
Joined: Oct 2007 Posts: 242 Nova Scotia, Canada smileyd Hack from Nowheresville
smileyd Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Oct 2007 Posts: 242 Nova Scotia, Canada	I haven't been doing much FDK, but I had to say I love how you used my line! Desiree Don't think about the pink elephant... I dare you! Thanks to Tineke for the avatar

Re: FDK: Secrets #54453 08/06/08 03:43 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 201 South Carolina Rona V. Hack from Nowheresville
Rona V. Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 201 South Carolina	Ha! Great little vignette here. Love the idea of Jimmy with superpowers, and then him doing the greatest rescue of all - rescuing Clark from Lois' wrath. Fantastic!

Re: FDK: Secrets #54454 08/06/08 06:19 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700 Beth S. Columnist
Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	This was great! And such a surprise ending. It was great fun to read.

Re: FDK: Secrets #54455 08/07/08 04:49 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia BJ Top Banana
BJ Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia	I really enjoyed this story. My mind jumped through a couple of scenarios when I read the first line, but they were nothing like this. Brilliant. I particularly liked how Jimmy silently observed Clark and Lois. Maybe Clark's inability to work both jobs and build a relationship with Lois was the reason Jimmy didn't reveal himself earlier. Heh. Wendy's first line "What do you mean, we're fraternal twins?" would work great for a sequel. Thanks for posting.

Re: FDK: Secrets #54456 08/07/08 10:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	I like the concept. laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: FDK: Secrets #54457 08/07/08 02:10 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip Features Writer
anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate it! I have to say, something about this line stuck with me after I read it (Thanks, Desiree!) and while I didn't actually intend to write anything at first, a whole host of ideas went through head. My favorite of the rejected ones was that Jimmy was actually a slimy monster under his clothes - he looked kind of like the aliens on the Simpsons but dripping with slime. This idea came much later and while it doesn't make me laugh in the same way, it lent itself much more to a story. It's good to know that even when I feel like my muse is on vacation, I can still get something out that's mildly entertaining.

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