Nancy -

I love this!!!!

I was starting to wonder if Jimmy was Superman, but that didn't seem quite right.

Now the sequel could start with... "What do you mean we're fraternal twins?" .

Seriously. I understand Lois' frustrations and wonder if Jimmy's intervention will be enough to sooth Mad Dog Lane. Would be interesting to see .

Carol

Oh loved this! I could just picture Lois and her fury, LOL. Great job!

Wonderful Jimmy flies! Will Lois forgive Clark? Can Jimmy take some jobs so that Clark doesn't lose Lois!

Loved this

I haven't been doing much FDK, but I had to say I love how you used my line!

Desiree

Ha! Great little vignette here. Love the idea of Jimmy with superpowers, and then him doing the greatest rescue of all - rescuing Clark from Lois' wrath.

Fantastic!

This was great! And such a surprise ending. It was great fun to read.

I really enjoyed this story. My mind jumped through a couple of scenarios when I read the first line, but they were nothing like this. Brilliant.

I particularly liked how Jimmy silently observed Clark and Lois. Maybe Clark's inability to work both jobs and build a relationship with Lois was the reason Jimmy didn't reveal himself earlier.

Heh. Wendy's first line "What do you mean, we're fraternal twins?" would work great for a sequel.

Thanks for posting.

I like the concept. laura

Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate it!

I have to say, something about this line stuck with me after I read it (Thanks, Desiree!) and while I didn't actually intend to write anything at first, a whole host of ideas went through head. My favorite of the rejected ones was that Jimmy was actually a slimy monster under his clothes - he looked kind of like the aliens on the Simpsons



but dripping with slime.

This idea came much later and while it doesn't make me laugh in the same way, it lent itself much more to a story.

It's good to know that even when I feel like my muse is on vacation, I can still get something out that's mildly entertaining.