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Okay, so here's the next part. Hope you enjoy it. ML 
She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane
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Okay - so it might take me three or four days to get through it you can still send me the whole file  . Ugh - I'm not sure where you're going with this. I'm not sure where or when they are but it's a time/universe with Martha at least. That's something. She has no idea who Superman is, but she knows Clark - that's good. She doesn't know Lois - that's not. Hologram generator was good. So was Lois getting into Hamilton's good graces . I'm not quite sure what to think since we have 8 million parts to go and I'm sure you're going to take us on a wild ride between now and then. I'm a little afraid. Or maybe I should be very afraid... Two or even three posts a day would be fine with me. Carol
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I'm with Carol on this one. Two or three parts per day would be just fine with me. Or you could just send me the whole file and I'll devour it as quickly as my eyes allow, I promise  I have no idea where you're going to take us with this, given how long you say it is, but I'm more than ready to find out! Interesting premise you have here so far. Can't wait to see more!
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Well, Congrats MLT as a person who is generally highly sceptical about the science and philosophy behind time-travel, the fact that I am so far still paying attention to your story should be attributed to your genius.... I like the fact that you are still focussing on the characters, and have not totally focussed on the differences between parallel universes guess I'll just wait and see how long I stay glued to it...
You can't have MANSLAUGHTER without LAUGHTER
The Neuroscientist: Eating glass makes you smart...do you want to see what you can learn?
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Hi ML, I was so busy worrying about posting my own story, I didn't even notice you had begun posting a new story. The minute I spotted it, I was over the moon.  And you didn't disappoint - I'm hooked already. Time jumping-around, as opposed to time travel, really. I wonder if Lois and Clark will get to do alt-dimensions too before you bring them home safely. You are planning on bringing them home safely? I couldn't bear a little girl named Vicky being without her parents. Seems we both like the name Victoria Kent. Looking forward to the next part. Yours Jenni
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You are sooo evil. Like the others, I'll take the whole thing now... please?
“Rules only make sense if they are both kept and broken. Breaking the rule is one way of observing it.”
--Thomas Moore
"Keep an open mind, I always say. Drives sensible people mad, I know, but what did we ever get from sensible people? Not poetry or art or music, that's for sure."
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See, Lois is the best at coming up with plausible excuses on the fly...
Can't wait until Friday.
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Finally, ML! I was beginning to think I needed to send a nagging note to get you posting. Word of advice to readers - keep your eye on the ball and fasten your seatbelts. There be twists ahead. Great story, ML. c.
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I still like the chatter between Lois and Clark, even though I would be panicked if I lost one of my kids.
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Yay! I'm doing a little happy-twirly dance in my desk chair. Love this story so far, ML, but I didn't really expect anything else. I'm such a fan! Can't wait for the next part.
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Still no idea where you are taking this. Although I'm beginning to think 'Sliders'. Don't ask me why, just a gut feeling. Am I right. Something along the lines of Ooops! only with actual travel instead of soul travel into their pasts? Can you give us a hint at which part it will become clear where this is going? Or will you keep twisting it into new genres every 5 to 10 parts? just a hint. Please. For the poster makes me wonder that LnC will just mess up their pasts twisting their futures around. Or will they end up with future normal selfs and twisted past selfs, trying to fix it?
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Has enough time passed to start harrassing you for another part (or forty) yet? Sorry, my reading appetite is insatiable, especially when it comes to your stories
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Absolutely awesome!!! “May nineteen ninety-two, huh? I remember that time. If I recall correctly there was a breach in Star Labs security about that time.” Hey, maybe this breach of security was this very incident... so one more point in support of they are in their own universe. Where did the "return" key take them? Maybe the return key only works if they are in an alternate universe, so they are still in 1992, but then their neighborhood looked the same except for their house... Yet there's no Superman, so it's gotta be before 1993, huh? Or maybe something else is going on... hmm, wherever and whenever they are, do their counterparts exist or..? Can't wait for Part 3... Although I'm sure we'll get more questions before we get any answers  
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
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Sorry I'm late in posting, guys. Blame real life . Anyway, I only have a few minutes here so I'll try to get part three posted. But thanks again for all your comments. They are greatly appreciated. ML
She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane
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