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This is getting to be my favorite day of the week.

This is such a Lois way to think.

Cue foreboding music.

I, for one, am very proud of her for waiting as long as she did. With all of that impatience, she must have been miserable confined to her house in Smallville. Of course, she is patient when she needs to be; that's why she doesn't jump the gun and tell the police about what she has found too early.

The mixed emotions are so indicative of the early relationships between Lois and Clark.

She has regrets without being overwhelmed by regret. The older and wiser Lois Lane knows what she should have done, but she doesn't let her failures own her.

I totally didn't recognize who Drew was. Looking back I wonder why he leaked her leads, even though I totally understand why he warned her off the case.

Thank you for not ending the part at this point.

I can't wait to find out what where Wednesday brings them.


Elisabeth

I enjoyed this. I actually almost liked 'Call me Daniel' *shudder* I even told Anna - the Great Defender of 'Call me Daniel' - that she should read this one but she was waiting till it was done - I'll make sure to let her know!

Looking forward to Wednesday!
Carol

Great story and very well written. But like the others it leaves me wanting the rest of the story. How do they bring down the Gamma Group and who is in charge. Is it Luthor or some other villian.

You realize that we are going to want a story for every day of the week don't you. After all Folcs are nice people but very greedy when it comes to wanting stories.

Great part, Rona!

Like Elisabeth, I loved this quote:

Oh, how delightfully Lois!

I love how you contrast the young, almost ridiculously fearless reporter Lois Lane with the 37-year-old half-paranoid recluse Crazie Katie. And I love how Clark breaks down the walls of Crazie Katie, and how he not only finds but begins to break down the walls of Lois Lane, too:

I think Elisabeth quoted this, too, but I'll repeat it because its loveliness demands it.

This is just wonderful:

Looking forward to Wednesday!

Ann

Yes, there is going to be a Wednesday, right? I loved this story and I want more of these two!

Thanks everyone for the feedback on this. This part was really difficult for me to write because I'm not an A-plot sort of person, and this treaded dangerously close to having to fake an A-plot for me.

Elisabeth -

I had hoped I'd made that part clear enough, but I may work on that in my re-write before I submit it to the archives. What I was going for was that he knew there was something big going on, and he wanted Lois to get the story. However, when he first talked to her he didn't have any idea of just how dangerous this was. By the time he realized it, it was too late.

You have no idea how tempting that was for me to do just that

Carol - Thanks for the rec! I never thought Scardino was that bad, just a plot contrivance to keep Lois and Clark apart for a little longer. In this world I've let him be in love with someone else and taken away those awful shirts, so he's a little more tolerable

Kmar - A story for every day of the week? I think my fiance might disown me. He's getting tired of talking to the back of my head as I sit here saying "Shhh!! I just need to write one more paragraph...no, one more for tonight. No, one more..."

Ann - Thanks so much! After seeing the reaction to "Monday" I had a feeling this could easily turn into a series. However, it was never my intention to write anything more than that original super-short. I don't know where I stand with "Wednesday" right now. Writing it would require me to write an A-plot, and that is not my forte. Would you settle for: "Lois and Clark hunt down the bad guy. He turns out to be very mean. But the reporters prevail and live happily ever after. The End."

Beth - Thanks! I don't know where to go from here, though. I'm afraid my muse has hit a dead end at the moment. *I* know who the bad guy is, but no idea how to write the next part.

Thanks again so much to everyone for their kind words while I was working on this story!! If it hadn't been for all of the feedback along the way, this story would have read very much like the one I created above just for Ann.