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Great song, Jen! Thanks for sharing it with us.  BTW, I think the wife line worked, and I wouldn't mind seeing another section if you happen to whip one up.  Keep writing! ~Anna
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Cool <g> I didn't recognize the song, but it's good as a poem, too.  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Lovely, Jen! Thanks for sharing it and if you feel like it, you can write more soon. Saskia
I tawt I taw a puddy cat!
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Jen,
I agree - great song
merry
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You didn't give us the tune, but, like Pam said, this works just fine as a poem. The wife line was very apropos, considering the theme of the song (Clark trapped in the space/time window/box thing.) I liked it! The imagry of the lyrics kind of reminded me of the Moody Blues (am I dating myself?). Very nice!  - Vicki 
"Hold on, my friends, to the Constitution and to the Republic for which it stands. Miracles do not cluster and what has happened once in 6,000 years, may not happen again. Hold on to the Constitution" - Daniel Webster
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Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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