Great song, Jen! Thanks for sharing it with us.

BTW, I think the wife line worked, and I wouldn't mind seeing another section if you happen to whip one up.

Keep writing!

~Anna

Cool <g>

I didn't recognize the song, but it's good as a poem, too.

PJ

Lovely, Jen! Thanks for sharing it and if you feel like it, you can write more soon.

Saskia

Jen,
I agree - great song
merry

You didn't give us the tune, but, like Pam said, this works just fine as a poem.
The wife line was very apropos, considering the theme of the song (Clark trapped in the space/time window/box thing.) I liked it! The imagry of the lyrics kind of reminded me of the Moody Blues (am I dating myself?). Very nice!

- Vicki

Nice Poem