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FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50195 03/03/08 03:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 263 West of New Troy sunrei OP Hack from Nowheresville
OP sunrei Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 263 West of New Troy	So, any thoughts? October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark "Elastigirl? You married Elastigirl? (sees the kids) And got bizzay!" -- Syndrome, The Incredibles

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50196 03/03/08 04:06 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm Pulitzer
carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	I'm intrigued! That's all I have time for right now, but I'm waiting for Thursday! Carol My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50197 03/03/08 05:00 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Wow! love the alt-beginning. Both Lois & Clark are a bit different but delightful. Looking forward... And thanks.. before your story, I didn't know what advocacy journalism is If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50198 03/05/08 04:53 AM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia BJ Top Banana
BJ Top Banana Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,069 Georgia	Quote So, any thoughts? Very nice beginning. It has all the wonderful trappings of gripping A-plot mixed with good B-plot. I can't wait for part 2. I love alt beginnings as well and the changes you've made to Clark and Lois are subtle enough to fit into the LnC schema but big enough to make for an interesting and different kind of story. Loved the part about Lois getting Clark to smile and seeing Lois in top investigative form is always a treat. More soon, please. BJ

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50199 03/05/08 07:34 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	I'm intrigued, too! Ann

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50200 03/05/08 04:24 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Nice. You gave them a solid foothold on a relationship, established where the a-plot is going and gave them a bit of background. What more could we want? Elisabeth who felt awfully sorry for Jimmy who should have told her, "No."

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50201 03/05/08 06:28 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Nice start, but it looks like this Lois is going to be in a position to expose Clark in next to no time. Quote If anyone is familiar with my Smallville work, Yup, Daughters Framework4

Re: FDK: Above Alt Else 1/? #50202 03/06/08 08:14 AM
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OP sunrei Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 263 West of New Troy	Lol, thanks for the shoutout to my other story Frame. Also, thanks to everyone for commenting. My aim was to set the foundation for a somewhat reversal of personalities here. Now on to filling in some of the gaps! ~Sonia October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark "Elastigirl? You married Elastigirl? (sees the kids) And got bizzay!" -- Syndrome, The Incredibles

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