Okay, I didn't see any fdk for this part and that is just a real shame because I thought you did an incredible job PGing this part. Thanks for posting it over here.
On to fdk:
“No second thoughts,” he said. “I’m still only interested in the first ones.”
LOL! That line struck me as really funny and I had to laugh out loud. Cute.
“You have no idea how sexy that voice is,” Lois told him, reaching up towards him.
Heh - no kidding.
Clark sucked in a sharp breath at the sight of her dressed in black lace. The saucepan he was holding slid from his hand and landed on the counter with a metallic thud.
“What?” she asked. With a crooked little smile, Lois walked right up to him, planting a kiss on the side of his neck.
“I thought you said you weren’t going to walk around in that,” he said, placing a hand at the small of her back and pulling her in.
ROTFLOL! Yes, you did say that Lois... and here you are, prancing around in it... Too funny...
“Come back to bed,” she whispered.
“Don’t you Earth girls ever eat?” Clark asked, raising an eyebrow. If he didn’t know any better, he could have sworn she was trying to do everything she could to keep him from fixing dinner.
“Well yes,” Lois said, with a sly smile. “As a matter of fact, we prey on handsome visitors from other planets. First, we seduce them...”
“Interesting. And then what?” he asked, amused.
“Then…” She made a dramatic pause before going on. “Then, we rip out their spleen!”
Clark chuckled. “Ah! Well, I guess it’s lucky I just happen to be invulnerable, huh?”
“Um… I’d forgotten about that. I suppose I’ll have to find something else to do with you," she said, smoothing her hands across his chest. "Unless you’d rather have dinner, of course,” she added after a short pause, shrugging.
I really probably shouldn't be laughing as much as I am at this part, because it's really sweet, but parts of it are just so cute and funny.
“Superman belongs to the world,” he told her. Knowing that this would do nothing to calm her anxieties, he explained further. “But Clark Kent, on the other hand, you’ll never have to share with anyone else. He won’t ever belong to anyone but you, Lois.”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Yeah, see Lois! See why you should have always picked Clark over Superman???
I love that she decided to keep the cabin. What a nice little romantic spot for Clark to fly them up to from time to time. <waffy sigh> And I love that you got the "blizzard through the night" reference in on the last line. I just love to work my story titles into the story somehow. Hee hee.
Very nicely done, Lara! I didn't feel like I was missing anything from the edits. It didn't feel sliced up at all to me. You did a great job!
-- DJ
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