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I'm cautiously hopeful about this... it all seems to be moving in a good direction. Lots of really sweet stuff between L&C.  Write more, post more!  PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Leela! Can I tell you how thrilled I was that you posted a day early!! I love, love, love this story! The whole part went by much too fast, such a great conversation and so sweet of Lois to have perspective on Clark's fears. This is all looking so promising..too promising in fact. I'm terrified that Luthor will soon be raising his ugly head..  boo hisssss Can't wait for MORE! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Hi, Great part. That not a nice place to leave us hanging. More soon, please. MAF 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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L, good instalment.
You show Lois taking some timid steps forward, but she is still one heck of a screwed up young woman. I don't think that they can ever get to where everyone wants them to get to, relationship wise, by a normal healing process. It just can't happen. Neither will live that long.
That's why I'm convinced that it will take an outside 'incident' to push Lois into some sort of action, or admission before she can conquer her flashback problems. She needs to see Clark in a position of weakness, and she needs to be the one to recue him. Perhaps Lex can be of assistance?
Tank (who thinks it might even be better for Lois' mental health in the long run if Clark doesn't survive whatever trap you have planned and thus doesn't have to deal with him anymore)
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Leela Another wonderful part!  I love how Clark reveals his fears to her. I'm thoroughly enjoying this and can't wait to see what happens next. Tricia 
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Leela,
wonderful part
glad you posted today
Happy 4th
merry
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Leela  The B plot is moving along quite well. I am so happy you posted. This is one of my favorite stories on the boards right now. Great job. I see smoochies in the not too far future. Yaya. More soon! Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Again a great part  ...I love it...I love it...I love it ...please more soon. (/me begging ) Ren
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Lois knocked on the door, and Alice opened it. She registered surprise at seeing them together, and then recovered.
“What timing - you both arrived at – “
Lois looked at Clark. Should we tell them we came together? ACK! Tell her, don't tell her, anything! Just keep going! :p -Breanna (who has been completely hooked since she laid her eyes on this fic)
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Trask: Does Superman have any telepathic powers?
Lois: (blushing) I hope not.
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