I'm cautiously hopeful about this... it all seems to be moving in a good direction. Lots of really sweet stuff between L&C.
Write more, post more!
PJ
Leela! Can I tell you how thrilled I was that you posted a day early!! I love, love, love this story!
The whole part went by much too fast, such a great conversation and so sweet of Lois to have perspective on Clark's fears. This is all looking so promising..too promising in fact. I'm terrified that Luthor will soon be raising his ugly head..
boo hisssss
Can't wait for MORE!
~Liz
Hi,
Great part.
That not a nice place to leave us hanging.
More soon, please.
MAF
L, good instalment.
You show Lois taking some timid steps forward, but she is still one heck of a screwed up young woman. I don't think that they can ever get to where everyone wants them to get to, relationship wise, by a normal healing process. It just can't happen. Neither will live that long.
That's why I'm convinced that it will take an outside 'incident' to push Lois into some sort of action, or admission before she can conquer her flashback problems. She needs to see Clark in a position of weakness, and she needs to be the one to recue him. Perhaps Lex can be of assistance?
Tank (who thinks it might even be better for Lois' mental health in the long run if Clark doesn't survive whatever trap you have planned and thus doesn't have to deal with him anymore)
Leela
Another wonderful part!
I love how Clark reveals his fears to her.
I'm thoroughly enjoying this and can't wait to see what happens next.
Tricia
Leela,
wonderful part
glad you posted today
Happy 4th
merry
Leela
The B plot is moving along quite well. I am so happy you posted. This is one of my favorite stories on the boards right now. Great job. I see smoochies in the not too far future. Yaya. More soon! Laura
Again a great part
...I love it...I love it...I love it
...please more soon. (/me begging
)
Ren
Lois knocked on the door, and Alice opened it. She registered surprise at seeing them together, and then recovered.
“What timing - you both arrived at – “
Lois looked at Clark. Should we tell them we came together?
ACK! Tell her, don't tell her, anything! Just keep going! :p
-Breanna (who has been completely hooked since she laid her eyes on this fic)