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Hmmm, Mercy. Very interesting. If I get you correctly, Lois is trying to tell Clark that when he is with her, he can be himself. He doesn't have to hide behind personas and disguises. He can take off his glasses and his supersuit, and he can be himself; just a man, full of needs but also full of love. He so needs Lois's love, and she is giving it to him, but she needs his love in return. Because he is a man, unclothed and revealed before the woman he loves, naked and honest in body and soul.
Very beautiful, Mercy. Welcome to the boards!
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Uh oh. It seems we started the FDK thread at the same time... I hope this can be put togeter into one thread. Sorry! 
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Nice first fic! Nice fic, period! 
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Yes, that was really sweet. Even when he says he can't be with her, he still can't stay away.
Thanks for sharing, Mercy!
(Cornelia, you can copy & paste your comments from the other thread into your post here, and put "delete me" or something into the other thread -- one of us admins will clean that up for ya.)
PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
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Oh, that was such a nice fic. Beautiful! Is there any chance we'll see a sequel? I would love to know what happens next...
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Nice job, very sweet. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Beautiful!
This was so sweet and touching. I really love this kind of fic. I hope you have more to share with us!
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Hey, you've achieved a double fdk folder on your first time out! A sure sign of success.  Don't forget to send this one along to the Archive, Mercy, will you?  This was a lovely, sweet and poignant little vignette. The last line of dialogue got me all choked up. <snuffle> Let's see more from you soon. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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A nice start, Mercy. You've got to write again. I'm sure you can do it!
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Welcome, and congrats on de-lurking with such a lovely fic! I thought this was beautifully written and very touching. Hope to see more from you Caroline
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Gah! *happy sigh* Wonderful writing, Mercy! The details and emotions were so vivid!  I do have one complaint, though: You can't end it there!  Sara
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