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FDK: For Better or Worse #33913 11/02/06 08:24 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany Lara Joelle Kent OP Kerth
OP Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	In this short vignette, you manage to express Lois emotion to an extent that positively awes me. It is bitter-sweet and explores Lois' character perfectly well. I especially love the way you show the difference between her outward appearance and her inner turmoil. The only part I don't like about your story: It's too short... The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK: For Better or Worse #33914 11/02/06 03:09 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Ahhh! You've actually got me tearing up. Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: For Better or Worse #33915 11/02/06 03:57 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	It was great - I love how you expressed her inner turmoil. Quote Only her eyes betrayed her. Though not red-rimmed, they were flat and dull and just ... vacant. Quote No. Of course not. This was a marriage, not dinner reservations. I'm sad for her, but I find that funny and cool. Quote “Clark,” she murmured to herself just before the door swung open and she took Perry’s arm, “I hope someday, you’ll understand.” Perry at Lex and Lois' wedding! Can't wait until your next one! I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

Re: FDK: For Better or Worse #33916 11/06/06 04:01 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky. angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville
angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky.	Olympe, Jackie and Roo, thank you all for your wonderful comments -- I'm so glad you guys enjoyed this little vignette! And Olympe, your "complaint" that it was too short is one of the highest compliments you could ever give, so thank you! Seriously, you guys are terrific; thanks for reading, and for the amazing feedback. ~ Crystal "Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

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