In this short vignette, you manage to express Lois emotion to an extent that positively awes me. It is bitter-sweet and explores Lois' character perfectly well.

I especially love the way you show the difference between her outward appearance and her inner turmoil.

The only part I don't like about your story: It's too short...


The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)