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FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33616 10/23/06 04:23 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla OP Pulitzer
OP Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Well, it just makes sense that a fellow Kentuckian should be start the feedback thread, eh? Great little story. I wouldn't bother to say your stuff hasn't been beta'ed. I think I only saw one little mistake, and I'm not sure about that one. When is that silly woman gonna get a clue?? Quote “Lois, I’ve got you.” You've got me! Who's got you?! Sorry.... Couldn't resist! ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33617 10/24/06 02:18 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Aww beautiful! Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33618 10/24/06 02:24 AM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Oh...sniff, sniff...that was beautiful. I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33619 10/24/06 03:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 107 J jwb Hack from Nowheresville
jwb Hack from Nowheresville J Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 107	didn't know which feedback thread to use, but.... in a word. Brilliant. Soooo much emotion in so few words. Wow. -- Jeff

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33620 10/24/06 03:35 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 776 floor 13	Wow! I had to say something just because Jeff did. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33621 10/24/06 05:17 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Superb!! I can't think of the right word to say how good I thought this was. It just had it all. And it left me with a great big smile on my face. Well done! Quote Quote “Lois, I’ve got you.” You've got me! Who's got you?! Rofl! That's my all time fav quote from a movie. If Nancy hadn't said it, I definitely would have!!!! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33622 10/26/06 06:02 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky. angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville
angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky.	You guys have spoiled me with all this lovely feedback -- what an amazing welcome back to the boards! Classicalla, Jackie, Sheila, Jeff, SJH and Lara, thanks so much for reading and for the kind words; I just hope you all enjoyed reading this little ficlet as much as I enjoyed writing it. ~ Crystal "Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33623 10/27/06 03:42 AM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr... Matrix Pulitzer
Matrix Pulitzer Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr...	This was a nice painful little vignette. I read it a few days ago and thought I had posted fdk - I guess I just dreamed I had. Sorry I was late to the party! Wonderful! I loved the emotion you conveyed with Clark's biggest fear... MR Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33624 10/27/06 03:51 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	I don't know how I missed this the day it was posted! This is a lovely little vignette. I especially love the ending, the little "love yous" that couples exchange every day, that can become a habit but at times like this mean so much. Quote “Clark -- you came,” she managed, her forehead resting against his collarbone, just above the bright blue spandex. “Yeah,” he whispered. “I did.” Did she think that he wouldn't? She knows better. Or was this just relief because it was a closer call than usual? lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: Eyes Wide Shut #33625 10/27/06 07:41 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky. angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville
angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky.	Thank you so much for the feedback! No apology necessary, DJ -- I'm just flattered that you commented. And Mrs. Mosley, you're absolutely right -- she knows better. It was relief because it was a closer call than usual. (I forget how easy it is to forget that readers don't know the little set-ups gallivanting around my brain!) Thanks again, you two! ~ Crystal "Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

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