Well, it just makes sense that a fellow Kentuckian should be start the feedback thread, eh?

Great little story. I wouldn't bother to say your stuff hasn't been beta'ed. I think I only saw one little mistake, and I'm not sure about that one.

When is that silly woman gonna get a clue??


You've got me! Who's got you?!


Sorry.... Couldn't resist!

Aww beautiful!

Jackie

Oh...sniff, sniff...that was beautiful.

didn't know which feedback thread to use, but.... in a word.


Brilliant.


Soooo much emotion in so few words. Wow.

Wow! I had to say something just because Jeff did.

Superb!! I can't think of the right word to say how good I thought this was. It just had it all. *And* it left me with a great big smile on my face.

Well done!

Rofl! That's my all time fav quote from a movie. If Nancy hadn't said it, I definitely would have!!!!

You guys have spoiled me with all this lovely feedback -- what an amazing welcome back to the boards! Classicalla, Jackie, Sheila, Jeff, SJH and Lara, thanks so much for reading and for the kind words; I just hope you all enjoyed reading this little ficlet as much as I enjoyed writing it.

This was a nice painful little vignette. I read it a few days ago and thought I had posted fdk - I guess I just dreamed I had.

Sorry I was late to the party!

Wonderful! I loved the emotion you conveyed with Clark's biggest fear...

MR

I don't know how I missed this the day it was posted!

This is a lovely little vignette. I especially love the ending, the little "love yous" that couples exchange every day, that can become a habit but at times like this mean so much.

Did she think that he wouldn't? She knows better. Or was this just relief because it was a closer call than usual?

Thank you so much for the feedback! No apology necessary, DJ -- I'm just flattered that you commented. And Mrs. Mosley, you're absolutely right -- she knows better. It was relief because it was a closer call than usual. (I forget how easy it is to forget that readers don't know the little set-ups gallivanting around my brain!) Thanks again, you two!