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WOW! I love this. smile1

And thank heavens the ficus got some water! laugh

Thanks for sharing this excellent story. I enjoyed it immensely.

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Hey Mere! Excellent work! Love, love, LOVED it!!!

So when can we expect more work from you? <g>

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Meredith
ditto others
I loved it
wonderful story
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DITTO..DITTO..DITTO

I was really worried there that the poor ficus wouldn't get it's drink of water..poor thing! frown

Very sweet. I love how they were both bursting with this new found excitement over the new leap in their relationship..aww!

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For one totally insane moment, the words "I love you, Lois, and I can't face spending any more time without you - will you marry me?" had danced around his brain
So sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [Linked Image]

Wonderful!! thumbsup thumbsup

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Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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YAY! I finally got to read the final part! Great job Mere!

I'm glad the ficus got its water... and rotflol on the final line.

And that was some conversation between Lois and Clark! For some time I really thought you wouldn't get them back together. But you did, and what a wonderful smoochie followed!

So when do we get to see more fic from you, Mere? wink

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Spectacular story!!

You really did a great job with their characterizations and responses. every bit of it was believeable.

I really enjoyed this!! You are a great writer!

The ending had me chuckling.


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Wow, thanks, everyone! Wheee, my first ever "hot topic"!) laugh

I'm very glad y'all enjoyed this little bit of fluff. Okay, it got decidedly unfluffy in the last part, but I think I rescued it. smile (And Wendy, you're a great deal too kind! blush )

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Happy birthday, Sarah, Wendy and Annie! (a multiple present, huh? [Big Grin] )
Yep! goofy Three birthdays with one st... um... story. wink

Tank, I'm sorry my wham (the ficus going unwatered, and some of its branches dying) disappointed you. I'm afraid I'm just not much into blood and gore and missing limbs and all... which is odd, considering how much I enjoy Buffy, but there you have it. smile

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I wa extremely troubled by the way Lois persisted in comparing Clark to Lex. I thought it was unfair and rather cruel on Lois' part. Yes, both lied to her. I would not suggest they both manipulated her, though. And Clark certainly never behaved to Lois the way Lex did.
Hazel, I guess this is the S2 Lois characterisation rearing its head again. The Lois of the series went completely ballistic when she worked out the secret; I don't think it was a stretch for my Lois (several months closer to her nadir with Lex) to be badly rocked by Clark's lying. We'll probably have to agree to differ. smile

As for the one remaining issue...
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So when can we expect more work from you?

So when do we get to see more fic from you, Mere?
Um... er... /me takes the fifth. peep

Thanks again, Annie, Barb, Wendy, Pam, Kathy, Helga, HC, Alicia, Anna, Maria, Karen, Jen, Tank, Laura, Paul, Roger, skullee (welcome!), Hazel, Rivka, José, Tricia, Annette, merry, Liz, Saskia and L!

Mere :out of graemlins, but very happy:


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I return from my vacation to find THIS 'waiting' here. Of course, I couldn't keep myself from reading all three parts immediately.
So here are my comments to the whole story:

I loved it! smile1
I could really imagine all of it. The beginning had me guessing what it was Lois discovered. *g* I was way off track! lol (I was thinking the globe....)
You had me smiling broadly through most of the story, enjoying every word, every emotion, every turning point.

Excellent work, I can only compliment the author and draw my hat in humble admiration.

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Yay,

Another Buffy fan!!!!!

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Wonderful, Mere!!!!

Finally caught up with the story and I adored Self's POV!!

I thought Lois reasons for choosing her torturous couches was very inspired!! Great explanation!

Lovely smoochies!!!!!

Missy (who would put this story on her Kerth list if she had a Kerth list...)

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