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#31711 08/17/06 01:07 AM
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Ahh, that was so sweet! What a great start to your LC fanfic career!

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Clark had been happily confident that there was a sufficient lack of space for them both to be happily falling over each other for many years to come.
LOL, loved this!


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#31712 08/17/06 02:39 AM
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OMG! I can't believe you had doubts about posting your story, Miranda!! It is *excellent* clap

You're able to bring images into words in a way I can only dream of ever being able to do in English - I envy your ability to do that!
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Despite never having had the confidence or assertiveness of other men she had known, Clark’s kisses had always be anything but ordinary. In them she felt safe, desirable and unquestionably loved. The moment their lips connected Lois felt completely at peace and at one with him. Providing she could always escape in his kiss, she was sure that they could overcome anything.
Absolutely *magnificent*!

I'm sitting here at work and it's all I can do not to start crying in my cup of coffee, that paragraph is so beautiful and moving!

I really hope you will post more stories like this, girl! This is so excellent!

You've definitely found a fan in me. More, please!! blush


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
#31713 08/17/06 05:25 AM
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Wow, what can I say? I am lost for words. blush
Your comments mean so much to me. Thank you.

This has definately given me the confidence to continue. I've spent the last week writing, and re-writing this story, but I am so pleased with the end result.

I don't have any ideas for any long stories, which are the type that I usually write, so I think I will stick to short stories for a while, until something grabs me.

Thanks for your postive feedback. I too am glad I took your advice and posted! sloppy

#31714 08/17/06 05:46 AM
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This has definately given me the confidence to continue.
YAY!

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I've spent the last week writing, and re-writing this story, but I am so pleased with the end result.
I think we probably all write and re-write parts of our stories. wink And you *should* be pleased with the result, because it truly is an excellent piece!


Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
#31715 08/17/06 06:25 AM
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Welcome, MirandaW! That was a sweet, evocative and almost butterflies-in-her-stomach kind of story, like a delicate and beautifully shot WAFFY scene from a romantic movie. I noted, too, that the story fits your avatar singularly well! smile

Ann

#31716 08/17/06 04:33 PM
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You write really well. I usually get over excited about reading everything and zoom through to find out what happens, but you're so descriptive that I want to stop and see if I can picture everything that's going on...

Jen
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"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
#31717 08/17/06 04:56 PM
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Awwwwwwww!


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

Caroline's "Stardust"
#31718 08/18/06 06:37 AM
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Great story, Miranda! Glad you decided to post it!

It gave me that happy feeling that'll help me get through the rest of my long boring workday!

Thanks! Can't wait to see more!!

Julie

#31719 08/18/06 11:28 AM
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beauitful written love it thumbsup laugh clap


I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.

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