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Ahh, that was so sweet! What a great start to your LC fanfic career!

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Clark had been happily confident that there was a sufficient lack of space for them both to be happily falling over each other for many years to come.

LOL, loved this!

OMG! I can't believe you had doubts about posting your story, Miranda!! It is *excellent*

You're able to bring images into words in a way I can only dream of ever being able to do in English - I envy your ability to do that!

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Despite never having had the confidence or assertiveness of other men she had known, Clark’s kisses had always be anything but ordinary. In them she felt safe, desirable and unquestionably loved. The moment their lips connected Lois felt completely at peace and at one with him. Providing she could always escape in his kiss, she was sure that they could overcome anything.

Absolutely *magnificent*!

I'm sitting here at work and it's all I can do not to start crying in my cup of coffee, that paragraph is so beautiful and moving!

I really hope you will post more stories like this, girl! This is so excellent!

You've definitely found a fan in me. More, please!!

Wow, what can I say? I am lost for words.

Your comments mean so much to me. Thank you.

This has definately given me the confidence to continue. I've spent the last week writing, and re-writing this story, but I am so pleased with the end result.

I don't have any ideas for any long stories, which are the type that I usually write, so I think I will stick to short stories for a while, until something grabs me.

Thanks for your postive feedback. I too am glad I took your advice and posted!

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This has definately given me the confidence to continue.

YAY!

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I've spent the last week writing, and re-writing this story, but I am so pleased with the end result.

I think we probably all write and re-write parts of our stories.

And you *should* be pleased with the result, because it truly is an excellent piece!

Welcome, MirandaW! That was a sweet, evocative and almost butterflies-in-her-stomach kind of story, like a delicate and beautifully shot WAFFY scene from a romantic movie. I noted, too, that the story fits your avatar singularly well!

Ann

You write really well. I usually get over excited about reading everything and zoom through to find out what happens, but you're so descriptive that I want to stop and see if I can picture everything that's going on...

Jen

Awwwwwwww!

Great story, Miranda! Glad you decided to post it!

It gave me that happy feeling that'll help me get through the rest of my long boring workday!

Thanks! Can't wait to see more!!

Julie

beauitful written love it