Not too often I get to start a folder.
Some steamy parts in this section, ML, even after your g-ficing it down (or should that be up?)
But that's what interested me - (that sounds bad, like I'm just here for the L & C "interludes"
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Seriously, though, the essence of the scene is still the same - you've still conveyed the passion and depth of emotion that these two lovers intuitively share. And that's the important stuff.
Have to say, this story is one of my favourites of all the ones you've given us.
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