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Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31232 07/31/06 12:12 PM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr... Matrix OP Pulitzer
OP Matrix Pulitzer Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 2,667 The block around the corner fr...	angelic_editor -- Ahhh! Don't scare me like that! But no, seriously, that was awesome! You had me going at the start. Wonderful job showing us that scene through Mayson's eyes. Thanks for sharing! -- MR Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31233 07/31/06 12:23 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Well done! You had me fooled, I wasn't expecting that at all. (big fan of surprise endings, right here) Nice work!! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31234 07/31/06 01:20 PM
Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa FinLi Freelance Reporter
FinLi Freelance Reporter Joined: Mar 2006 Posts: 94 Hershey, Pa	Beautiful....I love it FinLi Clark: "Can I have a rat chief? Can I, huh? Please?" Perry: "Clark, do you want me to send you to the dark room?" Clark: "The dark room?"

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31235 07/31/06 02:57 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	I liked it! I got it very quickly, though - way before the end. I always hated it that Mayson got killed off. Maybe she and Dan Scardino would have made a great couple! ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31236 07/31/06 04:25 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada SuperRoo Merriwether
SuperRoo Merriwether Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 1,763 Canada	Excellent - I enjoyed it throughly! I too love surprise endings. I thought it was about Mayson part way through, but I try and not let my mind figure stuff out. I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31237 08/01/06 05:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 151 Singapore; but studying in Tor... M metwin1 Hack from Nowheresville
metwin1 Hack from Nowheresville M Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 151 Singapore; but studying in Tor...	Oh that was beautiful. Very sad, but beautiful. metwin1

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31238 08/01/06 10:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas A Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer
Anna B. the Greek Pulitzer A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,761 Athina, Hellas	Beautiful! I realized early that it was Mayson, but still. Great job! Very emotional. See ya, AnnaBtG. What we've got here is failure to communicate...

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31239 08/01/06 02:44 PM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Very well done. Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: Ack! Give me a heart attack why don't you? Or fdk for Seconds (1/1) #31240 08/02/06 06:28 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky. angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville
angelic_editor Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 221 Lexington, Ky.	Thank you guys so much for the brilliant feedback! All the comments have just blown me away. (And I knew with my penchant to push Mayson-centric fic on the boards as of late, it might be a bit obvious that the woman wasn't Lois before the end, but it's nice to know it managed to surprise a few readers!) But, I'll stop rambling — the point is, I'm so glad to hear y'all enjoyed reading this vignette as much as I enjoyed writing it! ~ Crystal "Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

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