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Hi FoLCs!

The preceeding chapters can be found Here

I'm taking a big risk here because my BR's haven't seen this yet. I'm sending it to them at the same time. Tricia's away goofy I still need your grading!

Meantime, if any of you gentle readers feel the need to point out any typos and such please do so. Hope you won't find really gruesome ones. blush

I'd really appreciate it if you'd want to read and comment. Thanks! smile


Lois: Well, I like my quirks. I think they make me unique.
Clark: You certainly are unique.

Clark: You're high maintenance, you know that?
Lois: But I'm worth it!
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Yay! I get to be the first to respond smile

Ursie,

This section was great! I loved how Dr. Klein reacted when he saw Clark. I really laughed when he wanted to talk to Superman and not Clark smile . I saw a couple of things that sort of threw me from a medical standpoint, but I can suspend my disbelief that Dr. Klein had invented some new, cool things that I don't know about.

Now hurry with the next part wink

- Alicia smile1


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Alicia, about that scan machine of Dr. Klein's... smile

For a long time now I've been wondering how Lois could have a scan made without her having to go to a regular doctor's office or hospital. goofy

I'm so happy to hear you laugh about Dr. Klein's reaction at seeing Clark Kent. I had fun writing this revelation scene! wink


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Wow I loved Dr Kleins reaction to Clark and then Superman again! LOL. Anyway keep it coming. Laura


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Ursie,

Email me (lxu2@cwru.edu) if you want to know what I think about the scanner that Bernie has. I have some ideas, but they will take a while to type and it is after 2am.

- Alicia


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Cool, Alicia! I'd love to hear your ideas! goofy


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ROTFL! thumbsup

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Ursie,
well done
Loved Dr Klein and Clark
more soon please
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Yay! goofy

Alicia's going to collaborate with me on the scanning issues and that is so cool! Considering she's busy writing her own fic trying to meet her deadlines. Alicia, you're the best! thumbsup

I really hope some more FoLC will want to read and comment.


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An excellent part! smile1

Where has that ship been? goofy
And Perry with Henderson! LOL! Poor Henderson! He's probably dying to find out what is happening.

I'm enjoying this immensely and love reading every new part.
So when is the next part coming? peep

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I'm so thrilled to see you posting feedback too, Tricia! hyper

Thanks so much for your wonderful praise! blush

I'm sorry you got worried about the spaceship. Well, you'll just have to wait and see what Bernie finds out about that. wink


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Well! I just feel I have to put in my 2 cents too even though Casey already commented on this chapter. When I asked how it was he just shrugged and said: very nice, you'll like it. :rolleyes:

So I was unprepared for a Dr. Klein going totally ballistic!
ROTFL! rotflol rotflol I almost choked on my coffee!

I'm dying to know what you and Alicia will come up with, Ursie. That machine Klein uses to scan Superman sounds scary! Hope you two will find a less intimidating solution for Lois. wink This is great, to see you using readers comments whenever possible, Ursie.

Can't wait till Sunday and the next part! laugh

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