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Surprise! Been a while since I wrote L&C fic... 😅

Written for Queen of the Capes's Location Challenge. Not beta-read; all mistakes are mine.

Have fun reading!

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There’s something to be said about the blue of the sky in this city. A clean, intense azure, not a cloud in sight. The city below may be drowning in the smog that weaves around its graceless buildings, but up on this hill, it’s like you’ve broken through history to meet the gods in their celestial home.

No, wait, that’s Olympus.

“Where’s Olympus?” Lois whispers to Cindy, pulling her from the arm.

“Uh —” Cindy stumbles a couple of steps backwards on the rough gravel, following Lois’s lead to put some distance from the rest of their group. She looks helplessly around, to the mountains surrounding the three edges of the basin in which Acropolis sits pride of place. “I don’t think it’s anywhere near here? It wouldn’t be so close to a major city. It should be somewhere far away and mysterious.”

Lois nods thoughtfully at that.

“We can ask the tour guide afterwards, come on —”

“Oh, spare me.” Lois has barely listened to an entire sentence of the tour guide’s dronings since they started the tour half an hour ago. Classical architecture and thousands-years-old history are not her thing, honestly. There are no dodgy politics and scandals to be uncovered — or if there are any, they’re more the job of the archaeology majors.

Cindy rolls her eyes and goes to catch up with the group, leaving her best friend behind to stare at the mountains in the distance. Whichever way you look at it, Lois has always enjoyed a view from the top.

“It’s about two hundred sixty miles from here.”

Her head whips around.

“Mount Olympus.” It’s a man who’s spoken — tall, handsome, bespectacled, about her age. His small, sideways smile comes off unexpectedly confident. “Two hundred sixty miles to the north.” He gestures forward — to where north is, presumably.

“What are you, a travel agent?”

“No, I just visited last week.” He shrugs. “When in Rome.”

“I’m pretty sure Rome is much further away than two hundred sixty miles from here.”

The quip pulls a small laugh out of him. He’s got a nice laugh; it sounds genuine. “Right. But it’s closer to here than my hometown.”

“Where’s your hometown?” Lois asks, without even knowing why. The journalist in her, probably.

“Small town in Kansas. You wouldn’t know it.”

She gives a small scoff and rolls her eyes. “Yeah, I wouldn’t.”

“And you?”

Her eyes stray over to the view ahead of them again, and she takes a moment to ponder her response. “Metropolis,” she admits eventually. “I go to Met U.”

“What are you studying? Not geography, I presume.”

It’s a good jab, but he can’t be allowed to let that go to his head; so she narrows her eyes at him. “Funny, aren’t you. No, I’m studying journalism.”

“That’s funny,” he says, although he’s not laughing. “That’s the exact reason I’m here.”

“You’re studying journalism?”

“I graduated last year, actually, and now I’m building my portfolio. I’m writing a series of travel features for a magazine based in Salonica. That’s closer to Olympus,” he adds in what would pass as a deadpan manner, but Lois doesn’t miss the twitch of his eyebrows.

She lets the joke slide, this time, but still has a reason to wave his words off all the same. “I’m not into that kind of fluff pieces. No offense.”

“What do you hope to do after you graduate?”

“I’ve got an internship lined up at the Daily Planet. My goal is investigative journalism.”

He whistles, impressed. “Bold.”

“Well, that’s me.”

His gaze remains on her, slowly shifting into something easier, more cordial. The dorky glasses and warm brown eyes really seal the look. A moment passes, then another one before Lois’s brain registers the intensity in the atmosphere. It’s dangerous, and she doesn’t have time for it.

“I’m sorry, I lost track of time,” she says, with a small shake of her head and a wan smile. “I need to go back to my group, or they’ll go into the museum without me.”

“Do you —” he starts, but she’s already stepping away, with a wave of her hand that’s as polite as it is final.

“Nice meeting you!”

She strolls down the path to where her classmates are gathered, the smile — small as it is — never fading. Cindy is already waving her over frantically; the part about the museum wasn’t a lie. The building stands at the far end of the hill, below the level of the antiquities, in a flat, rectangular shape and dressed in stone that matches the colour of the ruins; a discreet presence among the majestic, ancient temples.

“Who was that?” Cindy whispers into Lois’s ear as they trail inside after the tour guide.

Lois shrugs. She didn’t even get a name — not that it would mean anything. Spring flings with tourists were never on the schedule of this field trip. She’s not the person to enjoy a casual relationship, and her life is too chaotic — trips abroad, final papers, exams, an upcoming internship — to allow space for a stranger from Nowheresville, Kansas.

“Mount Olympus is two hundred sixty miles to the north,” she tells Cindy.

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OMG, the missed connection here has me swooning, SO CUTE! And they're both so perfectly in character.

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A clean, intense azure, not a cloud in sight.

I love this description.

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His small, sideways smile comes off unexpectedly confident.

I can see this!

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“No, I just visited last week.” He shrugs. “When in Rome.”

lol And I'm sure he remembers every mile he flew over, lol

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She gives a small scoff and rolls her eyes. “Yeah, I wouldn’t.”

LMAO, oh, Lois. So in character!

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It’s a good jab, but he can’t be allowed to let that go to his head; so she narrows her eyes at him.
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She lets the joke slide, this time, but still has a reason to wave his words off all the same.

I just love this combo because of the escalation; Clark gets under her defenses just a little, even in this short interlude!

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A moment passes, then another one before Lois’s brain registers the intensity in the atmosphere.

Awww!

Loved this! I wish there was a whole series of these little missed moments between them, whether they connect that it's always the other one or not. <3


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That was such a sweet meet cute. So close yet so far and they have no idea! Thanks for writing and posting this fun little story.

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Cindy rolls her eyes and goes to catch up with the group, leaving her best friend behind to stare at the mountains in the distance.


At first I thought she might be on vacation with her annoying cousin Cindy from INPY! laugh

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“What are you studying? Not geography, I presume.”


This is classic early season cheeky Clark.

This was sooo good and very in character for them at the stage of their life. Maybe this is where Clark gets the idea to work at the Planet all those years later.

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@JadedEvie: Glad you liked it! I tried to write it so that it could be read both as an AU first meeting and as a missed connection! Lovely to know it worked for you (and that you'd want more of it, even)! And I appreciate knowing it read in character, especially since I haven't written L&C in so long! 😅

@AmandaK: Glad you enjoyed!! ❤️❤️❤️

@90stvfangirl: Hahah I thought there might have been a Cindy somewhere but I couldn't remember, so I figured, to hell with it xD I'm really glad to hear it read in character, I love early season cheeky Clark and it's good to know he came out right!!

Thank you all so much for reading and commenting!! ❤️❤️❤️


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I love this! Lois and Clark’s meeting was cute and they’re both in character. My favorite line is “What are you studying? Not geography, I presume.” That cracked me up. At least he knows now that she’s doing an internship at the Daily Planet. I’m very happy you wrote this. If you decide to write more about these two, I would like to read more. Thank you!

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Lois shrugs. She didn’t even get a name — not that it would mean anything. Spring flings with tourists were never on the schedule of this field trip. She’s not the person to enjoy a casual relationship, and her life is too chaotic — trips abroad, final papers, exams, an upcoming internship — to allow space for a stranger from Nowheresville, Kansas.


Right guy. Wrong time. Perfect story.


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@Songbird: Glad you found them in character, and that Clark's joke worked! Thrilled to know you'd like to read more! ❤❤❤

@Morgana: I'm so glad you liked it!! ❤❤❤

Thank you both for reading and commenting!!


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What a delightful, fun story! Beautifully written.


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I love it. Will we see more of them in Greece? ^^


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I love it!!!


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@cuidadora: Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it!! ❤

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Hi Anna!
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but up on this hill, it’s like you’ve broken through history to meet the gods in their celestial home.

I do wonder if we’re either in future Metropolis or in Greece.

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“Where’s Olympus?” Lois whispers to Cindy, pulling her from the arm.

Oh, look, Lois on a Grecian school trip. Also, managed to not register that it was the *location* challenge. Duh!

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“I don’t think it’s anywhere near here? It wouldn’t be so close to a major city. It should be somewhere far away and mysterious.”

Also, those handy postcard-maps of Greece they sell at every tourist trap between Troy and Ithaca? (Yes, I know….and I know.)

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There are no dodgy politics and scandals to be uncovered

/Hands Lois a copy of the Iliad and the Odyssey/

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or if there are any, they’re more the job of the archaeology majors.

/Hands Lois a flat device, one button marked ‘do not touch’/ I wonder if Lois was Helena and Clark Paris while Lex was Menelaus…

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Whichever way you look at it, Lois has always enjoyed a view from the top.

LEX: love

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“It’s about two hundred sixty miles from here.”

Her head whips around.

Hello Clark! Let’s hope she doesn’t return home with a souvenir.

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He gestures forward — to where north is, presumably.

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LOIS: Not funny. Back home we have street signs and numbers. North is where the numbers are smaller. That’s how civilized people do it.

READER: /points at ancient artifacts showcasing the cradle of civilization/

LOIS: Your point being?

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“What are you studying? Not geography, I presume.”

Journalism. With a minor in survival training.

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It’s a good jab, but he can’t be allowed to let that go to his head; so she narrows her eyes at him. “Funny, aren’t you. No, I’m studying journalism.”

“That’s funny,” he says, although he’s not laughing. “That’s the exact reason I’m here.”

/Gets popcorn to watch chess match.

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A moment passes, then another one before Lois’s brain registers the intensity in the atmosphere. It’s dangerous, and she doesn’t have time for it.

What’s the worst that could happen? Fifteen minutes?
Newlywed LOIS: try two weeks.
Teenage pregnancy LOIS: how about nine months plus eighteen years.

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. “I need to go back to my group, or they’ll go into the museum without me.”

And then she’ll miss the heist of the bust of the Greek cat goddess Meowki.

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“Who was that?” Cindy whispers into Lois’s ear as they trail inside after the tour guide.

Just an ice breaker passing in the night.

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Spring flings with tourists were never on the schedule of this field trip.

But I thought she wanted to investigate and under the covers(sic) government secrets?

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She’s not the person to enjoy a casual relationship, and her life is too chaotic — trips abroad, final papers, exams, an upcoming internship — to allow space for a stranger from Nowheresville, Kansas.

“Mount Olympus is two hundred sixty miles to the north,” she tells Cindy.

That final sentence with its casual integration of The Boy’s knowledge and help into her day say a lot when contrasted with her flippant dismissal of the meeting. Very well done! clap

wave Michael

Edit: And I just realized - Lois was looking for Mt. Olympus and found a Greek God! Well, a boy-man with the body of a Greek God.


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I know I picked the obvious option for the location challenge but, duh! xD

L&C Iliad AU... 🤔🤔🤔

Thank you for reading and commenting, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! ❤️❤️


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Aww I love this. Such a great story.

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Oh this is lovely. Lois is on point!! Love Clark's teasing jokes. Favourite line: 'not Geography' 🤣

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@simplylanekent: thank you for reading and commenting!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

@Idontknowwhatmea: glad to hear Lois's characterization worked! And Clark's jokes! I had so much fun writing them both 😁 Thank you for reading and commenting!!


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The banter in this is so peak. Had me grinning from ear to ear! 😁

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@blg1987: YES!! The banter is one of my favourite things about L&C so I'm glad it came out well!! Thank you for reading and commenting!! ❤❤❤


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