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I hope you enjoyed  Any and all FDK is welcome  No changes to the schedule  Part 4 on Tuesday before 1 a.m. ET or after noon ET Part 5 on Thursday before 1 a.m. ET or after noon ET Preview The elevator was slowly rising to the ground floor level and stopped. Again, a soft ‘ding’ announced their arrival, and Lois took a deep breath, steeling herself for their escape. She expected that she would have to spin a tale to some unsuspecting guard about a drunken guest in need of being discreetly escorted off the premises. The doors opened and she stared into about half a dozen muzzles. / TOC Hope to see you all again in two days for part 4. Thanks! Michael
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Placing a tag here... BBL. ------------------------------- “No.” Lois shook her head. “Lex.” A timid smile was on her lips. “I want to be with you.” That's really a cunning line from Lois AKA ____  It had not been sure what to do, but had been told to move past the creatures and to the front. At least, there the creature named ‘Luthor’ was waiting. Hopefully it would soon get the chance to be alone with this creature and inquire about Kal-El. Poor Lex creature. He wouldn't have dreamed it in thousand years! HUNTER, creatures... sounds like one of those sci-fi alien comic books. “Leave Nigel in the door. That way the elevator will be blocked.” Great idea. Very practical, Lois! She indicated St. John using the tip of her foot. That's the Lois we know. “And now we just have to walk out the door. How hard can this be…” I'm wondering just that! MORE! 
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Delightful.  I am certainly looking forward to Lex being married to the assassin, and being outed in front of hundreds of people when the alien changes appearance. Still looking forward to Lois's reaction when she finds out who Zara is.
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I love Lois' sarcasm - boy nothing fazes her, does it? I am seriously loving this fic and wait impatiently for tuesday. 
LOIS:I don't like you.
MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either.
LOIS: That makes me feel so much better
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Still waiting for the Zara bomb..... and when you said they were going to disguise Superman I hoped it would include glasses... =P
And now we have to wait for Tuesday?
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/drive by posting/ Love the FDK and yay, the preview works. Reading months of OTOH seems to have paid off  As for Tuesday: Yep. But I'll do my best to post before heading to work Michael
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I love that Lex is marrying the hunter! What a fitting end for both of them! (Tez always freaked me out in the show. Creepy.)
Your episode smash-up is great - looking forward to the rest!
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Lois is facing muzzles? And it's the next to last part?
That's either the police waiting to rush the joint or she's found a dog show. And I find the idea of Luthor marrying the hunter hysterical. I wonder which one of them is in more danger?
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I can't wait to see Lex' reaction when he realizes his wife is an alien. Serves him right for replacing Lois with a clone on her wedding day to Clark (even if he hasn't done that yet)! I'm also waiting, not so patiently, for Lois to take a closer look at the disguised Superman. She has to be just seconds away from figuring out his secret. I wonder what her reaction will be. I'm sure I've seen stories where Lois found out soon enough after the whole "I'd love you even if you were an ordinary man" thing for her guilt to temper some of her anger, but I don't think that's ever been mixed with her knowing the reason he abandoned her was that he was locked up in a cage. This sincerely seems like a situation where the Lane temper may not be used. But of course, you've left us at a very bad place. “And now we just have to walk out the door. How hard can this be…” Come on, Lois. This isn't your first time doing something like this. How often is it easy?
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I love the idea of Lex marrying Tez. Till death do them part, perhaps? Tez doesn't seem like the anulment type of guy.
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This is fabulous! Can't wait for more.
Famous last words. (How hard can this be...)
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*Yay*  And who knows, maybe Tez is into bondage... Great idea. Very practical, Lois! What can I say… It *is* part of a buttler's job description, isn't it  Thanks so much for the FDK Patrick, I so look forward to seeing them married off, too. It sure sounds funny.  I’m totally with you on your Lex/Tez sentiments. Your episode smash-up is great - looking forward to the rest! Wow, thanks so much Hey, Terry, thanks and LOL, yeah, you do have an interesting reasoning there. I really had no idea that Luthor was hosting a dog-show on his wedding day. And I find the idea of Luthor marrying the hunter hysterical. I wonder which one of them is in more danger? Hmm… Sociopath vs. natural born killer... Nancy, so glad to see you could get up all in one evening. Serves him right for replacing Lois with a clone on her wedding day to Clark (even if he hasn't done that yet)! I'm also waiting, not so patiently, for Lois to take a closer look at the disguised Superman. She has to be just seconds away from figuring out his secret. Yeah. But to be fair, she did have a lot on her mind recently. This sincerely seems like a situation where the Lane temper may not be used. Could be… =X Come on, Lois. This isn't your first time doing something like this. How often is it easy? =X =X =X Hi, Elisabeth! I’m so happy to see you’re liking this bit, too. Till death do them part, perhaps? Tez doesn't seem like the anulment type of guy. Yeah. And Tez even has a spaceship. Might take Lex with him for a honeymoon in the Saturn Hilton  James, thanks! Just 7 more hours. Less, actually. And so great to know you enjoyed the closing line on this Thanks so much, everyone! You’re an awesome audience Michael, who will do his best to hit "new topic" first thing in the morning.
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I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get this far, but I will read the last two parts, too, I promise! I really liked what I've read so far. I just love that Lex is going to marry the alien/animal/hunter creature!  Great job! ~Christina (Who is hoping that Lex gets eaten by the Lois-look-a-like monster!)
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Hi Christina! So great to see you in here I really liked what I've read so far. /wipes brow/ Lex is getting what he deserves! Thanks and wow. Thank you so much for picking up the challenge and writing this, although I can't say that I really deserved it, because I had to bow out of the ficathon. You're welcome and I sure had fun doing it When I get a chance to read the rest, I'll post more fdk. I look forward to it and hope you won't set out a contract with Tez2 Michael
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Noooo! Lois, never ever say that phrase! This was a pretty tense chapter, particular that whole bit with Lois vs the lock. Very well done! Also, the fact that Nigel kept referring to her as "future Mrs Luthor" rather than her actual name just made my skin crawl. Somehow, having him stripped down to his posh underwear was hilarious. XD On to the resolution, hopefully...
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Hi Mary! This was a pretty tense chapter, particular that whole bit with Lois vs the lock. Very well done!
Wheeeee! Also, the fact that Nigel kept referring to her as "future Mrs Luthor" rather than her actual name just made my skin crawl.
 achieved  Somehow, having him stripped down to his posh underwear was hilarious. XD
And achieved Thank you for letting me know I hit my mark there! :wave; Michael
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